Hello. I would like for someone to take a look at my story and possible leave a comment/review/advice on it.
I really want to know if people like it or not and really want to improve on things. The story can be found here.
Thank you in advance.
Hello. I would like for someone to take a look at my story and possible leave a comment/review/advice on it.
I really want to know if people like it or not and really want to improve on things. The story can be found here.
Thank you in advance.