Name: Trick Shot
Nicknames: Snaggle teeth, freak-wad, bat pony reject, creeper (I didn't say they were good nicknames)
Age: 19-early 20's
Species: Pegasus
Gender: Male

Appearance: He has a slim and lean body for his age, has a messy white mane and tail, and has a light green fur coat. His cutiemark is a pair of sharp teeth shining. Speaking of which, he doesn't have normal pony teeth. Instead he was born with a birthing defect in which his normal pony teeth were replaced with razor sharp ones. This earned him to be the victim of a lot of bullies during his younger days.

Personality/Bio: Trick Shot is an emotional stallion with a complex persona. Because of his birthing defect, a lot of bullies picked on him and called him names based on his rather sharp teeth. Sometimes they would even go as far to beating him on occasion. He did have one friend however, his older sister. Whenever he felt sad or abused, she was always there to cheer him up. She meant everything to Trick Shot. One day however, something changed. When the bullies were beating him up again, something snapped and Trick attacked them, more like attacked them in self defense. He used his sharp daggers to take large chunks of meat out of his tormentors and ran away. This caused to grab the attention of a certain research group in Canterlot. They captured him and did all sorts of experiments on him to see what caused his defect. After some traumatic events and years of spending in the facility, his older sister found him and help him escape.

Trick made it out, but his sister was captured. She told him to run away and never look back. Trick Shot did that and vowed to himself that he would come back for her some day. Because of these events he developed a twisted view on Equestria, thinking that all citizens who were "normal" to be his enemies. Sad and alone, he's now looking for somepony to hold on to, and somepony to guild him through the darkness. Not only does he want to change Equestria, but he also doesn't want to be alone.

"Tricks": He's got a few tricks up his sleeve. He can use his teeth for self defense by biting anything who comes too close to him. He also taught himself a trick with his wings, where he would whip them so hard that some of his feathers would fly off like projectiles. Basically, he's using his wings like slingshots.

Thoughts?

This is not a bad oc, good job! There are some major cliches however- specifically the "no one likes him except one person" as well as the sad back story and the twisted view. Especially in San pony world this is downright unrealistic.

4741414 Ok then. Any changes you suggest?

4741531 bring some happiness into his life. With (almost) every bad there should be some good. Sure, he gets bullied, but maybe he has lots of friends. Maybe he went willingly to the science, it then someone took it over and became harsher. Little things like that mKe a huge difference.

4742454 Ok I'll be sure to make those changes. Other than that, who do you think would make a good love interest for this OC?

4742787 perhaps someone equally misunderstood, or someone who sees beyond the fangs. For this character I see someone caring and not prejudice, sort of like Fluttershy and discord.

4742803 Hmm, Ok. I'll think on that. If I just fix him up a bit do you think he would make a good believable OC?

4742949 yes, he just needs to have some happy.

4743075 Hey, I finally wrote a first chapter of a new fic with this OC. Want to take a look and check it out?

4864603 sounds good, I'd love to see it!