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Jetto
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First chapter of "Thunder & Lightning" is more or less finished, I just need to go over it one more time, fix some stuff and it'll be ready to be out. Anyone interested in being a pre-reader? Just to make sure it works and doesnt require a bit more tinkering.

If pre-reading/proof-reading is as simple as reading the chapter, making note of as many errors as can be found, and reporting them, I could probably manage that! :pinkiesmile:
Might help me get a better idea of Thunderlane's personality, too, still room for a cameo or two in the Trixie story. :twilightsheepish:

I'm up for it as well. I'll try and point out any errors I come across..

Jetto
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3382962 Ok then, I'll get to you when I finish editing it. Sadly, Thunderlane has very little role in it, but you'll get to experiance Rainbow Dash, the biggest jerk in the world. I might have gone a bit overboard with her attitude, but it's too funny to pass up.

Can't wait to read it.

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