Hey, everypony. Just thought I'd ask, is there anyone out there who would be willing to critique the PinkieBurn fanfic I've just written before it goes out on FIMFiction? If so, PM me, and I'll send you a link.

3733096 I wouldn't mind seeing it. Mine is 11-4 right now

Ah, thanks. I should point out, it's a pretty long story, so it might take a while to read through. But yeah, if you could provide me with some constructive criticism, that'd be very helpful.

Anyway, here's the link: The Reason I Can't Find My Love

3733115 I can give it a better look over when I get back to my laptop

Okay, thanks.

3733228 can't see it until you give access.

Actually, don't worry about it; I think I've pretty much sussed it out.

3735128 you do plan on making it shorter, right?

3735569 Yeah, I probably should. Any suggestions?

3735572 I placed where I thought it might be best to divide. Also, be careful with the song.