This will be my first attempt at writing fanfiction, and while I don't think I'm horrible at it, I could use some critique and/or advice (or even just general feedback). I'm also not sure if this is the best way to go about asking for help, but I can't really find another way.

The story revolves around Twilight and Fluttershy, and I'm about 6k words into it. The story is very much unfinished, but I have a clear ending in mind. And what I have written I'm happy enough to share with other people.

If anyone is interested, I have it saved as a google doc. PM me and I can add you to it or send the link

I have a bit of an interest however " revolves around Twilight and Fluttershy," (and diapers) is a bit vague on what the story is about. I mean is it a ship in this fic?

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No, its Fluttershy in a caretaker role over Twilight.

if you send me the link i will read and tell what i think