2929336
not too bad, there was a few flaws but I still like it

2929350 Do mind listing these positives and negatives?

2929358
Negatives:

inside when a lock is above the witnesses head during a statement that’s when you use it

It's quite an OP talent, even if it would make it so much easier for me, but I guess mine is quite cheap as well.

: He pulls out a pack of cards

Did I miss something?
where in the world did he get these? are they also hidden in his cane?
which brings me to another point, a sword in a cane has already been done in the ace attorney series, except it was a staff

He then looks annoyed but then a mechanical fist comes out the gun and punches him in the face

....wat because every hitman has one of those
also

a jack in the box

yes, because he was prepared to try to shoot himself, get punched, and make a jack in the box magically appear in his coat?

Positives:
I like most of your character, at parts it's a little cliche, but overall a nice personality
I mean it's not bad, I like the breakout and a lot about this character

2929762 yeah thinking of improvising it for the fanfiction I'm writing on... Fanfiction (The Website)

2929870
awesome

2929879 I'll post a forum when I'm done and add a link when I publish it

2929882
awesome, I'd actually like to read this story

2929934 good, I hope you enjoy (Also to avoid slight spoilers play dual destinies first if you haven't already)

2929950
gotcha

2929962 well later

2929970
yep, later

2930004 bye
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