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On behalf of Mariacheat, here is a thread for submitting OCs for the purpose of them becoming villains of one form or another.

Dracans, Diamond Dogs, Titanians, Jupitarians, Eponians... Doesn't matter! So long as said character is a villain, it's good to go:ajsmug:

When submitting a character, please follow this template:

Name:
Gender:
Race:
Age:

Appearance:
What does your character look like? Body type, hair colour, eye colour. What type of clothes does he/she usually wear? etc.

Personality:
What kind of person is your character? Kind? Rude? Perhaps gloomy or easily excited. What makes your character happy and what ticks them off?

Abilities:
What sort of abilities does your character have? Be they magical or other. Or are they just really great at gymnastics or something like that?

Background:
Your character's background. Where were they born? How did they grow up? Why are they where they are now? Stuff like that.

Other:
Anything else you can come up with. Could be a small little quirk, something they do or something they have.

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These are my OCs that another one of my stories uses.
Bale and Bane Grim: Twin Titanian stallions, as different as they are the same. Bale is the eldest twin, but was born weak and sickly, and must be in a wheel chair all the time. Bane is the younger one, but is physically stronger than his twin. Bale has the most magical power of the two, despite his infirmity, and can do all kinds of curses and dark magic, while also pushing his wheel chair telekinetically. Bane’s magic is weak, and has less applications, but is none the less dangerous. They are physical augmentation spells, as well as special torturing spells. They take jobs where they can kill, and revel in the murder of innocent ponies. From hitmen to terrorists, they will take any dirty task, and stop at nothing to complete their job. Bale has red hair, with a skull surrounded by fire as his Mark. Bane has black hair, and his Mark is a flaming sword. Their names are feared across the Underworld as the “Brothers Grim,” and they give off an aura of dread that causes those near them to shiver and pray their gazes do not fall on them. Bale’s wheelchair is not a cheap and flimsy item uses in hospitals or by commoners. It has a metal and plastic frame, padded in dark grey hydra leather. The wheels are thick and sturdy things of metal, plastic, and rubber. Because he uses his magic to push himself, armrests are built into the sides of his chair, and he can attach a portable desk to it in a pinch. A dark purple blanket always covers his lower half while he sits.

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I added a template in my initial comment, please follow that when submitting your characters.

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Name: Bale and Bane Grim

Gender: Males

Race: Titanians

Age: 30 (Twins)

Appearance: Bale is red haired and in confined to a wheelchair, his body being physically weak. He is the older twin. Bane is the younger twin, with black hair, and is rather well muscled for a magic user. Both have pale skin.
Bane is the sportsman sort. Wears sports jackets and leather trench coats to appear intimidating. His hair is styled into spikes with gel.
Bale has his hair slicked back in a very professional style, and wears a black suit and tie as his attire. Bale is confined to a wheel chair due to poor health. Bale’s wheelchair is not a cheap and flimsy item used in hospitals or by commoners. It has a metal and plastic frame, padded in dark grey hydra leather. The wheels are thick and sturdy things of metal, plastic, and rubber. Because he uses his magic to push himself, armrests are built into the sides of his chair, and he can attach a portable desk to it in a pinch. A dark purple blanket always covers his lower half while he sits.

Personality: Both of the Brothers Grim, as they are often called, as cold and remorseless hit men, willing to murder and maim anyone who gets in their way. Still, their personalities are different. Bale is quiet and calculating, preferring to use deceit and guile to achieve their objectives as well as playing mind games with his victims. Bane prefers intimidation, using his magic and strength to bully and terrorize. Bane can be loud and outspoken, but listens to Bale when the older twin has an idea. Bane cares deeply for his crippled brother, and Bale is also always looking out for his "baby" brother. The two will do anything for money, be it kidnapping, murder, or even terrorism.

Abilities:
The Brothers Grim are Titanians, and are excellent users of harmful, destructive magic. Bale is the most powerful of the two, his physical weakness allowing him to develop immense magical powers. He pushes himself around in his wheelchair with his telekinesis, yet his best spell is Shadow Flare, a black fire that can burn magic as readily as flesh, crippling whoever it touches as it tears out their Gifts. Bale knows a number of mental domination spells and mind rape techniques, brutalizing their very soul.
Bane has a weaker amount of magic, but still has impressive skill. His magic is mainly based around physical augmentation or "buff" spells, as well as weakening enemy traits, or "de-buffing." He has a repertoire of torture spells, such as flaying people, nerve shredding, and more. He can summon a sword made of fire as one of his spells.

Background:
The two brothers were born in Prance to the last heir of a poor and downtrodden noble family. Their father trained them as mages for years, using cruel and abusive methods. Eventually, he murders their mother as a threat to them on their 13th birthday. Three years later, Bale and Bane murder their father in his sleep on their 16th birthday, burning down the mansion and fleeing Prance. Bale kept a single item from their home when they fled; The Book of Horns, a tome of ancient, evil magic written by Grogar the Necromancer centuries ago, and which was stolen by one of their ancestors after he led the battle to defeat Grogar's undead armies.
Now, they are feared across the world as the Brothers Grim, the top hit men in the entire underworld of crime. Their team work is exceptional, and their employers know better than to try and cheat them of their pay, as those who do betray them end up as corpses in their own homes.

Other:
With the Book of Horns, Bale seeks to create a spell that allows him to steal the body of whoever kills him, making him immortal as he body hops from murderer to murderer. He is almost finished and Bane wishes to help his brother gain a new, healthy body. Together, they will become immortal...

Name: Inari Dracon
Gender: Male
Race: Titanian
Age: 20
Appearance: lean muscular (like a runner), silver hair, different eye colors (one red and one blue), wears glasses, wears jeans and the top half of a kimono with purple flames on it with a katana on his back.
Personality: Inari is a little gloomy but mostly neutral to all except children and his sister (the only time he smiles), but when he get angry he become a beast. Will stick up for anybody who can't fight for themselves (civilians, children, the elderly.) Enjoys nature, is bothered by its destruction, and is a Mercenary.
Abilities: Can control all types of fire and can create purple fire. Is a master swordsman.
Background: Abandoned by his parents with his sister at age 4 (sister is 2 years younger), Inari was raised by a wandering Dracan for 14 years. Was born in a small vilage on the edge of Equestria. Works a as Mercenary to pay his sisters medical bills after she gained a serious disease after they started wandering when he was done with his training. Sisters name is Emilia.
Other: has a seance of honor and never fights an unarmed opponent. Never forgets a face and always payes his debts. Never learned the name of the one who trained him.

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Name: Rovellia Von Rosa

Gender: Female

Race: Jupitarian

Age: 21

Appearance: Rovellia wears an elegant deep violet blouse underneath an unbuttoned jet black overcoat that reaches to the back of her knees. She also wears a matching pair of black dress pants with a violet-merging-into-crimson-at-the-end sash around her waist over a simple black belt with a sword-sheath attached. Her shoes are knee-high combat boots that match the pants and overcoat with a small vertical violet stripe on the sides. Her hair is tied in a free flowing ponytail (ha!) and is black in color. She wears a pair of black shaded spectacles (glasses) that hang on the bridge of her nose. Little to no make up but looks drop dead gorgeous. As for body type; she is slim and tall, around 6 foot 5 inches (or 198.12 cm) and of a tanned skin tone. her wardrobe is just variations of her "normal" outfit. Very classy and formal. Her eye color is hazel. (and because you like to hint at, and tempted to do, clop... she has tribal tattoos all over her body, which is hidden by her clothing, with a joke tattoo of a arrow pointing at her... err... "posterior" if you catch my drift... :rainbowlaugh:) Also, her wings are crimson near her back and form into crimson as they get farther from her.

Personality:
Rovellia is a very no-nonsense girl. She hates slackers and hates repeating herself. On more that one occasion she has fired someone for being a minute late with her coffee. She is rude, but not without grace. Strangely enough she can find the nicest ways to shame, extort, and steal from you. She is manipulative and her very name makes her employees and victims shudder. She is not a competitor in any of the Equestrian Events but she loves sport and often finds herself in sword fights with world class professionals. The only thing that makes her excited is a potential bride, which is her whole motive. She can get pissed when things do not go with her plans.

Abilities: Sword Fighting, Fog manipulation, business professional, rich-girl connections, and extremely seductive.


Background:
She was born in Canterlot as the orphan daughter when she was eighteen. She lives alone in her late-parents, rather large, estate with full staff. She was homeschooled and knows how to run her father's banking company like a cat plays with yarn, it is simply fun for her. While she doesn't take business seriously, she does indeed remain professional and is considered a genius when it comes to investments and decisions. She was raised as a privileged child but was all too aware of how all aspects of life were. Her parents, while alive; had hired criminals, whores, politicians, and other scum to teach her many aspects of the dark life of the world. She lost her virginity to a couple of married whores who taught her about sex, she can pick a lock in two-point-three seconds without being caught, and can blackmail you with something you've never done in your entire life. While she does indeed have all of these skills, her mental health is another matter altogether. She Is often lonely and is overly-aggressive because of it. She is scarred from being taught by criminals and often judges people to a point where she leaves them in a state of minor depression. She is in Ponyville to find a wife before she turns 22, which is only a month away.

Other:
Lesbian, Formal dialect, decorated fencing sword made black stained steel, and wears very punkish pajamas when at home. (Tank tops, no shorts just boxers, and occasionally stockings.) Not a villain bent on domination, but a villain of manipulation for a goal.

Name: Alex Crostell
Gender: Male
Race: Dracan
Age: Unknown
Appearance: He is tall, over 6 feet in height and rather skinny. He has long messy black hair pulled back into a loose ponytail. His eyes are a dark amber colour.
He is normally seen wearing a black suit. He is also never seen without this violin, which he carries around in a black hard shell case.

Personality: Is a rather charismatic and charming, always seeming to be able to persuade others into doing his biding. While he can appear nice, he is actually rather cold and calculating. He has no quarrel with violence of any kind nor does he take any twisted sense of pleasure from it. To him it is just another tool to be used. He won't let any thing stand in the way of his ambitions, friend or foe, he'll cut them down. He is not a person to get mad or any emotion at all reall, it's like he's stuck in an eternal state of apathy. The only thing that will well and truely piss him off is if someone is messing around with his violin.

Abilities: Alex could be concidered the antithesis of Shining Armour. Where as Shining is a master of defence, Alex is a master of combat, through magic or physical ability. Despite his physical appearance, he is incredibly strong and what he may lack in speed he makes up for with skill and range. He also has a large mana pool to draw from allowing him to cast magic for longer. Though he has the power to crush through others defences, he prefers to whittle away at their power instead of using brute force.

Background: Alex is the only child of one of the original 12 Dracans. He was raised as a warrior, always fighting whether it be with brains or brawn. He watched as greed corrupted the minds of those around him, unflinching as they squabbled amongst themselves until nothing was left. From those ashes he rose, creating an underground empire. Everything from drugs to money to people, if you needed it he could get it to you, no matter where you are. Though, Alex doesn't do it for the money or power but simply because he can. His sense of curiosity drives him to do what ever he wants on a whim, damn the consequences. While he is in Equestria with no evil intentions, things tend not to stay very stable after he shows up. He is currently in Equestria to reacquire an instrument from the princesses that was said to have been a gift from the King of Draconia before the rise of Discord.

Other: Is strangely fond of music tending to be more leniant to those with some kind of talent in music. Is always carrying around a key to a lock that he knows not where it is, though he has made it a goal in life to find out what it opens.

Name: Brant Betsalel

Gender: Male

Race:Titanian

Age:29

Appearance: Brant has a slender build with a pale to greyish deathly skin tone his hair is stark white and tipped blood red at the tips. His hair is usually pulled back in a loose ponytail. His eyes are blue green and pupil less but in the dark and shadows seem to glow with an eerie unnatural light, his clothing speaks volumes of his profession. Normally dressed in a black shirt and pants he also wear a chest place over the upper half of his body leaving his midriff free and flexible. he wears a heavy mantled trench coat with a collar that reaches to just below his eyes. on his feet he wears a set of modified knee high boots fitted with a metal plate on the shin and another over top the foot. Lower face and jaw are often wrapped with strips of black cloth. a wide brimmed hat often hides his eyes from view initially and he walks with a black wood staff intricately carved to look magical in nature

Personality: Brant at first is cold but persistence(and a little drink) can get him to open up about some things, but he has a serious streak he doesn't carry many friendships and even those are tenuous at best he doesn't trust easily and shows compassion even less. Money is his motivation in life and seeking friendships or bonds is something that could be used against him

Abilities: He is a duelist of great skill specializing in two sword style using twin scimitars, as well as a saber and main gauche style using one scimitar and a dagger in his left hand, he knows some hand to hand stills but is much more dexterous with a blade as such he carries 6 daggers on his bet at his back just in case he is ever disarmed. His true skill lies in his magic though He learned at a young age he was adept at shadow blending and walking which is why he favor darker clothing. he can bend shadows around his body to near perfect concealment and can shadow walk as well. much like a normal teleportation spell he can move one place to another but his is through a shift to an in between realm where a 5 minute walk could take him from the everfree to the heart of canterlot this ability is diminished in daylight as the number of shadows, and thus suitable exits is much lower. His final ability rests with his eyes they allow for darkvision while not as keen as what can be seen in daylight, the night through his eyes would seem to be the time just before the sun sets.

Background: Born in Germaneigh, Brant was exposed to dark magic early in life which led to his appearance and fascination with shadow magic. he learned early in life the golden rule, those who have gold make the rules. This lead to him taking up intensive swordsmanship training that eventually led him to the life a mercenary. His particular skills led him to some nasty contracts, most were assassinations others were taking out high level or skilled warriors. As long as he gets paid he doesn't care what the job is and those who don't pay him have usually wound up spiked to a wall in a very public place.

Other:While not inherently mean once he begins work on a contract he knows how to switch his emotions off running on pure instinct and cold logic. due to the appearance of his eyes he often plays himself off as blind to lull his targets into lowering their defenses.

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