Hey everyone!

So like the title says, I'm working on this story where I actually roll dice in real life to determine what happens in the story! So there's no outline for what direction the story goes! Honestly, I'm looking for some feedback to let me know if the flow of the story still holds up.

TCanterlot High's D&D Club

• Equestria Girls
• Dungeons and Dragons
• Adventure
• Mystery

Sunset and the girls join a club only to find that there is more going on than the game itself.

• Gore
• Violence
• Death
• Main 7 (EqG)

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It's a long story so I know that made dissuade some people but if anyone is interested, please come take a look! I would love any and all criticism. Thank you and keep being awesome!