So after a half a year of not updating this story I've decided to get back to it but need an proof-reader for the chapter I plan to upload. If not to much is wrong with it, I'd like some opinions on how the story looks so far. Specifically this is the 3rd chapter in a story of mine called "The five stages of being turned down". Even with the little more I've typed it feels a bit short but I don't want it to turn out like one story I had to cancel because I realized I was just typing words for the sake of making it look longer rather then there being a point so I'm thinking of posting the chapter just as is. Here The password is madfox
PM me or leave a comment here saying if you want to do it.