Ill be honest, I know Im not the greatest pony, but at least I actually used the talent I was given instead of wasting it. So I...blew up some things, I didn't kill anypony, and if I did, I didn't kill many...Of course, I did eventually get caught, and sent to jail. Unfortunately I also shared a cell with an insane pony, who pushed me through his special void portal he himself wont even use. Now I woke up here, in this weird metal cage, metal chains on my legs, and a magic damplifier on my horn, in a pristine white room.
Im honestly afraid now, and some tall creatures in lab coats have just entered a room across from me. I see them through the window, and they are staring right at me.
3699587 I'll be honest, I know I'm not the greatest pony, but at least I actually used the talent I was given instead of wasting it. So I...blew some things up. I didn't kill anypony, and if I did, I didn't kill many... of course, I did eventually get caught, and sent to jail. Unfortunately,I also shared a cell with an insane pony, who pushed me through his special void portal that himself wont even use. Now I woke up here, in this weird metal cage, metal chains on my legs, and a magic damer on my horn, in a pristine white room.
I'm honestly afraid now, and some tall creatures in lab coats have just entered a room across from me. I see them through the window, and they are staring right at me.
3702569 In that case, I feel as if you are merging two stories together. One is about a bad guy that gets caught and the other one is about a guy 'participating' in experiments.
If this story came out, I'd probably just skip the first part and start with the juicy laboratory stuff.
Any editing fixes you can help me with?
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I'll be honest, I know I'm not the greatest pony, but at least I actually used the talent I was given instead of wasting it. So I...blew some things up. I didn't kill anypony, and if I did, I didn't kill many... of course, I did eventually get caught, and sent to jail. Unfortunately,I also shared a cell with an insane pony, who pushed me through his special void portal that himself wont even use. Now I woke up here, in this weird metal cage, metal chains on my legs, and a magic damer on my horn, in a pristine white room.
I'm honestly afraid now, and some tall creatures in lab coats have just entered a room across from me. I see them through the window, and they are staring right at me.
3699587 What story is this? Do you have a link?
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not a story yet, just a description.
3702569 In that case, I feel as if you are merging two stories together. One is about a bad guy that gets caught and the other one is about a guy 'participating' in experiments.
If this story came out, I'd probably just skip the first part and start with the juicy laboratory stuff.