I make this short, aparently my writting is so awfull that I can't even pass the bare minimun to get a story published (yes is that bad), so I really really need a brave soul to take a look at my stories and tell me what the hell is wrong with them. English is not my native language so theres probably a ton of things wrong with them(you would have thought that 6 years of study would have amounted to something ;n;)

4533099 Have you tried self-editing tools?
http://auto-reviewer.appspot.com
http://www.reverso.net/spell-checker/english-spelling-grammar
http://www.onlinecorrection.com
http://www.spellcheck.net/grammar-checker
http://www.slickwrite.com
http://www.paperrater.com/free_paper_grader
http://www.writersdiet.com/WT.php
http://hemingwayapp.com
http://www.polishmywriting.com/
https://www.grammarly.com
http://spellcheckplus.com/
http://www.grammarcheck.me/

No not really to be honest, due to my circunstances I make most of my writting on a tablet so a lot of softwares are simply not compatible but I would give it a try when I get on my computer,thanks for the help :)