So....

I read through "Framed Ink" to have a point of reference moving in to visual media from now on.

I dedicated my first practice page to a story I wanted to re-write more than any other in my series. But now... It will never be told.

"Be Kidnapped. Be Friends."

So, what do you guys think?

So constructive critique

Nice use of panelling, lettering could be a little neater however. I like the speech bubbles, especially how Flash Sentry (?) explodes to reflect his loss of temper. Top panel could maybe a tad sharper? I do get your trying to go for a fuzzy "in the distance" vibe though. Oh and I feel like Shimmers facial expression needs to shift slightly in your third panel. Looks a tad copy-paste, unless your intention is a kind of deceptive vibe.

Overall however for a first attempt/practice I'd say you were very successful, this is good quality stuff i'd expect from someone with alot more experience.

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Thanks...

One thing though.

Thats not Flash.

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I made an assumption on that in fairness, hence my (?)

The background is well done and consistent.
The character design is proportionate all the way through. One minor drawback is that a few details feel too heavily shaded, such as Sunset's eyelid.

Interesting story as well.

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thanks