Is it okay if someone can give me tips on making a yugioh fanfic so I don't mess up on mine

7823983 What are you looking for?

7823996 Well I need tips on writing out duel scenes since my first attempt wasn't good

7823983
I suggest when writing duels, don't let it look like wiki articles.
Like avoid it being just bare bones, add details.
Like what the characters do to perform a move, how they react to whats happening in the duel.
What the summoned monster looks and what it does to carry out its effect or attack.
What happens to carry out a spell/trap's effect, what is the spell/trap's card art.
Those details

7824016
Hmm okay thanks