A fairly terrible tale involving frosting enema's, baked goods and the graphic torture of a young foal.

Lets do our worst.

714497

Ehh.
It's not that bad, incredibly messed up yes, but I didn't see that many spelling or grammar mistakes.

Also, it's your own story, ya silly.

715292
Yea but I like getting reviews .

Feel free to be as harsh as you want btw

715359

Guess that makes sense.

714497 oy laddy dats some pretty nasty shit

714497
I wrote a miniature story to put in the comments. The literal second I finished it my phone died.

I'll do it again later.

717483

I've never felt the feel I felt before today, my heart bleeds for you