The updated chapters are kept on Google Docs, so if you wish to comment, please do so on either the blog posts or here in the forum post.
I emphasize again that I'm updating and expanding the story in advance of the eventual continuation to a) refresh my memory and re-immerse myself in it, and b) incorporate all the lore we didn't know about back then, as well as tie it in more directly to the Firefly series I write that Feathered Heart spawned.
I further emphasize that I'm not changing any major existing plot points; just some details and generally fleshing things out a great deal more. The eventual continuation will be written so that it will work with either the old version or the new. In any event, Chapter 6 is now available at the above links. Read and enjoy.
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The updated chapters are kept on Google Docs, so if you wish to comment, please do so on either the blog posts or here in the forum post.
I emphasize again that I'm updating and expanding the story in advance of the eventual continuation to a) refresh my memory and re-immerse myself in it, and b) incorporate all the lore we didn't know about back then, as well as tie it in more directly to the Firefly series I write that Feathered Heart spawned.
I further emphasize that I'm not changing any major existing plot points; just some details and generally fleshing things out a great deal more. The eventual continuation will be written so that it will work with either the old version or the new. In any event, Chapter 6 is now available at the above links. Read and enjoy.