Well hello there! As you may know, my name is *CENSORED*, but you can just call me RisingOne. I am always looking for fresh perspectives on my work, and this seemed like just the group to go to!

The story I would like to share with you is: Que Sera, Sera.

And it goes like this: With an entrance marred by tragedy, Michael Greenfield finds himself in Equestria. With no way home in sight, he has little choice but to adapt. However, the mystery surrounding him isn't one that can be so easily forgotten.

Now, while any feedback that isn't outright negative is appreciated, there is one thing I am looking for. That is, the characterization of Michael Greenfield, my OC for this story. I am not looking for someone to tell me what he should be like, simply how I can make his character stand out more.

Thanks in advance for any help I receive.

I like this story. I liked how you made him go into a really hard situation right after he breaks his shell. I think how you are characterizing him is making him stand out. Keep up the good work.