Hi! I would love if someone reviewed my first fanfic Chaos is my Cutie Mark. It has been reviewed before but most pepole either say I need a proof reader for it (Even though I had gotten one after about 3 chapters or so had passed.) or that it doesn't even read english which is a little confindence defeating considering im a 15 year old american that is supposed to know these types of things by now. Im also worried that I didn't write the main characters right and that im missing somthing so Ive stopped writing the story till all the grammer problems are sorted and the train wreck of words on the first page deters readers from finishing it, scince most proof readers seem to only read new chapters you give them and not old ones.

1120566 I'll have a look if I have the time. I'm not a good proof reader though .

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Oh its fine I would rather have a review, I was just explaning what im aware my writing is lacking as a warning.