Hello everyone. I would like you to share you thoughts about my story The Incident. It is a human in Equestria. Matt a human with an okay life gets suddenly sent to the land of ponies.
I m trying to make this story not adventure based. It may have it in parts but I really want to explore how Matt will interact with all of the ponies.
Hello everyone. I would like you to share you thoughts about my story The Incident. It is a human in Equestria. Matt a human with an okay life gets suddenly sent to the land of ponies.
I m trying to make this story not adventure based. It may have it in parts but I really want to explore how Matt will interact with all of the ponies.
The story can be found here. The Incident
Any feedback is welcome.
705365
Make it sensible and flow well, and you'll be fine.
705365 Can you add a link to the story?
705422 Fixed