I shall be joining in on the Borderlands stories soon, and I want this groups opinion before I full pubis my first chapter.
I have the first 1500 words on a Preview Google Document, and I want you all to read it through and voice your opinion.
It's not much, compared to what I have in the full doc, but it will give you an idea of how I'm starting it.

Doc found here.

Also, I'm looking for an editor. If you're over the age of 18, and know how English words in and out, message me or post a comment.

I'd turn on suggestion/comments if I were you, so people could correct typos and other awkward sentences.

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For now, I turned in commenting and what not. I am going to go back and editing this a bit, but I do need an editor for this.

Fuck it I need a good story for now so PM me when its published.

4435067 Will do.