Royalty for a Day

I wanted some feedback for my story as it's my first time with both Luna and Pipsqueak as the main characters. I had some help with the accents for Pipsqueak but I felt like my Luna wasn't quite there.

It's a light story, focused on culture as much as the characters rather than excitement, but the first of the two chapters is 11k long.

-Piquo

4651000 Sure, I think I can read it later.

4651014

Much thanks, and nice avatar.

4651016 Thanks!