Hey all I have a story that I want you to criticize. It's not complete by any stretch of the imagination, but I want to hone my skills and Improve my story anyway I can.
Here it is: A Tale of Two Twilights
And here is a WIP of Chapter 2: Chapter 2 WIP
Any criticism would be welcome as well as any tips or suggestions for improvement.
Hey all I have a story that I want you to criticize. It's not complete by any stretch of the imagination, but I want to hone my skills and Improve my story anyway I can.
Here it is: A Tale of Two Twilights
And here is a WIP of Chapter 2: Chapter 2 WIP
Any criticism would be welcome as well as any tips or suggestions for improvement.