Hello, I was wondering if someone could give my story some criticism? Tell what I should change or drop?
You can be as harsh as you need to. If it helps me get better, I'll take it.
Here's the story. Thank you to anyone who deices to help.
Hello, I was wondering if someone could give my story some criticism? Tell what I should change or drop?
You can be as harsh as you need to. If it helps me get better, I'll take it.
Here's the story. Thank you to anyone who deices to help.