Hello, I’ve just posted my latest story: it’s called Philomena. I would like some suggestions in how to fix it, since I received lots of negative comments. So please have a look at it, when you have time.
Hello,
I’ve just posted my latest story: it’s called Philomena. I would like some suggestions in how to fix it, since I received lots of negative comments. So please have a look at it, when you have time.