My thoughts: 1st chapter - somewhat of overskilled character, but she is nice and adorable. 2nd chapter - boring... incident in the hospital... superkiller-Blackjack-ninja hunting a pony... booooooring. “...you did.” What? Wait-wait-wait, it's more and more intriguing... Wow, excellent fighting scene. Revealing of her real nature. Very interesting ending.
I love this story!!!! Going to continue the reading.
My thoughts:
1st chapter - somewhat of overskilled character, but she is nice and adorable.
2nd chapter - boring... incident in the hospital... superkiller-Blackjack-ninja hunting a pony... booooooring. “...you did.” What? Wait-wait-wait, it's more and more intriguing... Wow, excellent fighting scene. Revealing of her real nature. Very interesting ending.
I love this story!!!! Going to continue the reading.
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Heh, glad you stuck around long enough to get to the hook! I hope the ending lives up to your expectations.