Chapter 3 is written and now in the editing phase.

I am so very thankful to my friend, SnivyG.Absol, for helping me with edits for my newest chapter. It is written and now just needs edits. Snivy has a phenomenal story on FimFicton called, “The Spirit Crusaders”. You really should check it out if you haven’t already. There are A LOT of clarifications that I need to make. Also, if you haven’t caught on with Grogar’s character, this is MLP Gen 1 Grogar, and I am basing most of his character off of, “The Return To Tambelon” episodes. Its a 2 part episode for MLP Gen 1. So, understandably, A LOT of references like, Grogar calling Equestria in chapter 2, “Ponyland”, are coming from that. You can find those episodes with Grogar on Youtube, if you search for “The Return To Tambelon.” There is another character named Bray which will make his first appearance in chapter 3, and if you are unfamiliar with this character, it is completely understandable. Bray is a donkey henchman of Grogar, his most loyal henchman. Bray does appear in the MLP Gen 1 episodes of, “The Return To Tambelon.” He is canonical to MLP, and was sent to the Realm Of Darkness with Grogar at the end of that episode. Though, if you have never seen MLP Gen 1, particularly those two episodes, understandably, you probably don’t know of his character.

My reason for including Bray is because he is in the Realm of Darkness and I felt there needed to be interaction with him because he is Grogar’s canonical most loyal assistant according to MLP Gen 1.

With all this said, I am so excited that the chapter will be released soon, and I am so excited to hear all of your thoughts,

The Author.