I need some ideas

Hey everyone, I know you’ve been wanting some new chapters, but halfway in, I got stuck. So I’d like some help on what should happen next.

So far, all I got was having him show up at twilight’s, and pick up a book, switch to twilight’s pov, and that’s where I got stuck, if there’s something you’d like to have happen next, let me know.

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[Spy986089]

If you want some ideas read My Little Pony destroyers are magic

[Spy986089]

It's some pretty good and there's a lot of songs

[Rob_Rhapsody]

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Please read my other blog posts

[GreatDragonLord]

the chapter ended with Duncan's arrival in Ponyville. We will "dance" from this.
1) Even if he has money left, they tend to run out. Need work.
2) The body is new, therefore, coordination and fine motor skills are impaired. We need at least two trusted individuals as teachers of magic and flight. Rarity is immediately excluded because she is too impressionable and hungry for gossip. Rainbow flies out (ha, pun) because, for the element of loyalty, her mouth is too big. Twilight dissects the protagonist for scientific purposes rather than teach him magic. Fluttershy will get a heart attack the moment she sees Duncan.
3) If I remember correctly, you planned to make the pony of shadows something like Venom. In this case, you can somehow come to the discovery of the ability to symbiosis.
Dare! And all the best to you.

[Rob_Rhapsody]

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…… wut?

[GreatDragonLord]

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Something is wrong?

[Rob_Rhapsody]

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Yeah, I got completely lost

[GreatDragonLord]

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What specific points are not clear to you? I'll try to explain.

[Rob_Rhapsody]

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I don’t suppose you would like to assist me in writing the story?

[GreatDragonLord]

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Isn't that the point of the whole post?
I am happy to offer ideas for development, but they are unlikely to help much.

[Rob_Rhapsody]

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Please look at this and spread it around.
https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/995607/if-anyones-good-at-math-please-read-this