flurry heart rewrite · 12:22am Jun 28th, 2022
I'm posting to see interest in the rewrite. It takes a lot of my time to write so I wanna see if interest is even there. I could be writing other stories. I do like this story. But it isn't what I want it to be, even now. So what do you guys think? Scrap it? Or do I keep writing?
I love it so far. Please don't stop. It would drive me nuts to see another good story go unfinished. It is so more interesting than the original and the original was pretty good. Maybe cadence could discover some the issues with the element bearers if she asked them if you could say anything to the elements what you say and end up hearing some of the problems that they have like always having the threat of punishment over their heads.
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I suppose I mean it does have an ending this story is just more I dunno. It's less jumpy and while it will have a different ending. The idea is still the same. The idea itself is really strange. Maybe I should reach out for some help with it. So it becomes less hard for me to handle. Also, that is a really good idea. It think this is a way to make things a bit easier and flow a bit better cuz I'm kinda stuck at a wall.
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Well I am willing to give ideas when it comes to good stories. Your story would have to 100% perfect or really awful to get nothing from me and the first one is more likely. You have been doing really good so far on the rewrite. I can't wait for flurry to try to get into trouble.