She-Ra: Broken Reflection

I have finished Act One of my She-Ra AU! I'll be taking a break to write ahead and then be posting again once the Fall arrives. Please feel free to read and comment on it!

Comments

[TheManehattanite]

Archive isn't letting me in for some reason, so can't give as full a review as I wanna, but anyway only three chapters in, but this is good stuff! You really get the new Elseworldy dynamics of the characters down in a way that feels really lived in, with just enough recognizable/"Is that the trait I think it is???" traits.

Ligthspinner is (still) an AWFUL parent. I love her.

[Crack-Fic Casey]

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That is literally exactly what I needed to hear, thank you!

I also really love looking to see characters from angles we don't get to see them from-- I wish DC would do a real Earth 3 book. (The last one was just kinda 'The Boys but we're not R but also we have nothing to say') I wish Marvel would do more stuff like 1602.

ALSO very happy to hear that I've written Light Spinner well, she's-- complex.