Feedback · 2:59pm May 11th, 2022
Hi all. I've been wondering how you feel about Diary of a Married Griff. I appreciate your feedback, because there's still room for my writing to improve.
Also, I appreciate any tips that you have for the story as a whole - especially in the relationship dynamic between Gabriel and Matilda. I would like them to progress in their relationship, but at the same time I want to avoid any romantic clichés and just write something that is natural, unforced, and simple.
Thanks a lot.
Did the story get memory hole'd? (Or taken down for maintenance?) I was just starting chapter 3 when everything went 404
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Yeah...I've taken it down again. I think I need to revamp the entire story again.