Confusion revoked · 6:32pm Apr 25th, 2022
So, recently, after my most recent chapter of the Troubled creature and I have decided to make a big move to at least salvage what I previously made.
what I mean, folks, Is YES, I have created nothing more than a confusing mess with no plot points till 19 chapters later, too many questions, so much confusion. SO much confusion! and above all too many loose ends that just turn a lot of readers off apparently.
My biggest problem is apparently I have caused you guys to think I expect you all to know what a lot of the confusing references that pop up continuously and being told this just almost makes me want to give up and write something else that isn't a confusing pile of inconsistencies or whatever.
so, Instead of trying to appease the tiny few as I go, I'm just going to revoke the story and rebuild it from the ground up! (don't worry every chapter has been backed up on my google drive)
what I should have clarified is that some of these "chapters" are actually a part of an opening ark, or prologue, that'll act as a setup for the main story to come. BUT, since everyone kept complaining that it's confusing, I'm just going to pull it off the shelf and rework it till it makes better sense.
forgive me, I'm not ranting directly at anyone, just, tired of failing to spark curiosity with the vague references, so instead of walking away from this, I'm going to do something about it and hopefully fix this project so that It can read better. otherwise, I'll have to go the Tolkien route and make the chapters three times their size micro explaining every reference that will indirectly give away the main plot.
anyways, again, I'm not mad at you guys, more like at myself for making this troubled mess, to begin with...
Don't worry It'll be back in no time.
SOUNDS LIKE A PLAN! you have my support!