Apr
2nd
2022
I Unsubmitted My Story Once Again · 7:44am Apr 2nd, 2022
Hello, good readers.
I once again unsubmitted Zephyr Breeze: The Most Anxious Friendship Ever after I just noticed even more problems that passed my eye.
I also have an announcement to make: I will no longer be submitting my stories without finishing every chapter and proofreading all of them first so that I make sure my writing is all clear and consistent. And what I'll do instead when I sumbit my stories is that I will publish the first five or six chapters, and then publish the rest by doing one chapter per week.
I apologize about this new change, but I have to do it so my carelessness won't ruin my writing.
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TheStallionofDarkCavalry · 210 views
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Was it my comments pointing out a few issues that caused this? I mean you didn't really have to unsubmit the story these issues only required minor fixes. You could easily keep it up for now and fix them at your leisure, but you do what you feel you must.
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Don't worry about it. Those things you pointed out were really helpful, so I still thank you. It's just that this story is probably the most complex so far, so it needs a lot more brainstorming and rewrites. And also, I'm kind of a self-conscious person, I worry that people are going say nothing but what is wrong with what I'm doing, so I try hard my hardest to be careful so mistakes don't happen. I did with my first story and it turned out pretty well, but I was pretty careless with the sequel. i didn't sumbit Truth or Dare until I was around like Chapter 8 or 9 I believe.
Please, don't feel like you did anything wrong, because you didn't. Like I said, your criticisms were very helpful, so thank you.
Yeah, I know. I knew I was phrasing it in a way that sounded like this was a bad thing when it's actually a good thing but I couldn't figure out a better way to say it. I understand and will wait for it to be republished and for new chapters.
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Thank you. I'll also try to pickup the pace this time since I've been putting this story on hold for months. And I will assure that even though I hate Zephyr Breeze as a character, this story will not simply be a bashing of him. Who knows what will happen to him or Anon through out this story?
Well I look forward to seeing the story again when you finish what you need to do.