Updated Cover and Story Plans

So, I have effectively made an outline for my first story, and man is it going to be a long one. I have a basic idea of what shall happen within the story, but it is in bits in pieces (some of which I am writing as well). As for Chapter 3, it still need to be edited, but I am making progress with the first draft of Chapter 4. Here is a snippet of Chapter 3:

“Alright, you degenerates, your fun time is over!” an alabaster unicorn pony with a teal mane yelled from outside Chora and Night Shade’s tent. “Come on out before we drag you out ourselves!”

“Who is that?” Night Shade wondered out loud.

“Doesn’t sound like anyone I know,” Chora responded.

“Alright!” the pony shouted. He lit up his horn and ripped the tent open, putting the couple on full display to the outside world. “Times up!”

“Hey!” Night Shade cried. He tried to sit up before continuing his charge. “What’s the big—”

“Shut up!”

The unicorn’s hoof crashed into Night Shade’s face, flinging him back down to the ground. Chora just stared in awe, wide eyed and not fully comprehending the situation. 

“You’ll do as you’re told if you want to get out of this with your life. Now, get up!”

Night Shade remained on the ground, his body quivering. His barrel convulsed, and his whines growing in their intensity.

“Why did you do that?” he whimpered, turning back to the stallion. A cut on his face swole where the alabaster unicorn’s hoof landed. “What did I do?”

Exciting stuff. Also, a little editing to the cover did wonders. I just added some text to it, and I think it looks great! I have seen a lined version of the cover now, and I cannot WAIT until the final version is handed over. In the meantime, here is an approximation of the final cover with the sketch.

Hope to bring more updates soon! I am hoping to release at least one chapter a month.

Thanks for reading! I really appreciate those who have done so and have received it well!