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  • 44 weeks
    Okay so the climax of the story, to say the least is having behind the scenes issues

    This story was always going to end with a fight with a nerteln, unfortunately while I spend a lot of time on basically every other background element in my story, I never worked on filling out nertelns enough. Basically the nerteln fight against Doctor Willow was always a "fill in here" moment for what Doctor Willow actually did. This has been a problem because while it is easy to come up with

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  • 61 weeks
    So Bhooks is down, and I think it's actually gone.

    I went to check on "bhooks" the website where I was posting a secondary story and it's been down for multiple days, never got much traffic to begin with and their twitter hasn't even re-tweeted anything since August. I think it's safe to say that the website is basically entirely dead. Which is frustrating because it was the only place I could find to post fiction where you could download it and

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  • 62 weeks
    Writing stalled but is starting back up again.

    Basically I ran into confidence problems with the climax again.

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  • 82 weeks
    Next chapter or two has been interesting to plan for

    As you can probably tell this story didn't turn out exactly like I had planned it would, it spent more time on the yunguaq stuff than the Knicknik stuff at this point because the focus of the story is on Twilight and Naudia. This has caused some problems for the climax because of the limited number of developed characters out there in Knicknik.

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  • 87 weeks
    So things are finally calming down I'm getting back into writing

    I've just released another chapter of "The Exogenous God" on Bhooks, the next chapter of Werewolves of Knicknik will be finished probably within the next week or so and I'm getting over my post-covid cough.

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Jun
3rd
2021

Moving on from Chapter 14 · 10:03pm Jun 3rd, 2021

Chapter 14 was painful to write, I kept second guessing myself every step of the way because of that one reveal in it. Moving on from Chapter 14 we're not out of the woods yet. There is something coming up for this story where I'm pretty sure I'm going to lose people.

To lessen the blow a bit or at least lose some people early I've decided to put out this blog post.

The idea behind what I'm introducing in this fiction(lets just call it "the new fiction") is an idea of what the future could look like, graphene, genes have been replaced, you can get your head put back on, everybody lives in rotating habitats in dyson spheres(by modern standards dyson swarms, but I want to kill the modern idea of a dyson sphere dead, it's stupid, especially compared to the original idea of what is now called a dyson swarm.)

To that end people design their own bodies, they can switch races(think fantasy races not modern day races, nothing to do with say skin pigmentation, everything to do with say switching from a jellyfish werewolf to a raptor-rat thing) and that means by extension they can choose their own gender. To facilitate that I decided to utterly cut this stuff off from modern gender politics entirely.

The way it looks now is like this sorta infinity symbol thing I did with crappy ascii:(I would like you to pretend that the periods here are just spaces, fimfiction removes spaces and tabs and it really screws with formatting)

He.............She
Andro.......Gyno
........<><>
Male.........Female
He.............She

And in the middle of the infinity symbol you have the mid part, AKA mid-andro, mid-female, etc. I deliberately set this up to avoid any connection to modern gender politics. That's the baseline for all this.

Now in addition to that I ran into another problem, people are generally going to want to have kids, their kids, and I hammered my skull at this for quite a long time before I found the solution: Everybody from this new fiction is a hermaphrodite, they have both sexual organs can bear children and where they put themselves on that infinity symbol thing depends on how they emphasize primary and secondary sexual characteristics.
So a male would be male secondary sexual characteristics and de-emphasized female primary sexual traits. Andro would be the same with a focus on female primary sexual traits and de-emphasized male ones. De-emphasized in this case means hidden most of the time, I think you get the picture.

The last thing to explain would be the mid part of all this, here somebody who is stereotypical male/andro would just look like a guy, end of story. With the mid part of the spectrum you have people who are on the borderline, and I invented that terminology because I didn't want to have to write "femboy" or "tomboy" over and over again. I wanted a term that has no existing connection so people don't automatically think of one thing or another when they think of it.

I am certain that this post, even with how deliberately neutral I'm trying to be with all this is going to get me some creepy stalkers who follow me around and hate everything I do for whatever reason. But I hope it's gone some way to explaining my position on this, what I'm trying to write is the future, a place where nobody would care if you were say trans, if you complained about it they would just tell you to go down and change yourself already. People wouldn't worry about getting fat or old or coming out to their parents or changing who you were. Basically I want a fiction where all of the bullshit that happens today in gender politics is just solved already.

Even with saying all that I'm not done with this sorta thing and there is more coming about this, just nothing I think would really piss anybody off.

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