The Sequel Has Arrived!

Finally! I have taken the feedback from my first story and used it to improve my writing. However, I didn't just do that; I also put some effort into learning how to write better from guides and other's stories. Who could imagine?

Of course, this sequel won't be completely devoid of issues or errors. Although I feel, comparing both stories side by side, they are written by two different people.

So, after fighting with my own capabilities and a six-month drought of motivation, I present to you something I'm actually proud of:

TTwilight Runs Away, Any Way

• MLP: FiM
• Adventure
• Comedy

The results of Twilight's actions unveil after her train derails off Canterlot Mountain. An injured Twilight flees the crime scene, only to meet more dangers on her way home. Celestia and Luna get interrogated.

• Gore
• Violence
• Twilight
• Celestia
• Luna
• CMCs

Stygius Nix · 11k words  ·  14  0 · 818 views

Following a train crash, Twilight must flee the crime scene as Luna and her sister are branded TERRORISTS and the law is closing in. A flightless, magicless, Twilight must embark on a perilous journey from Canterlot to Ponyville in the depths of winter. However, the cold won't be the only thing to bite at her as she meets a quartet of fillies camping in the woods, being stalked by a savage beast.