Zone 15 Monster Mares · 4:11pm Mar 4th, 2021
Behold! The writers blog!
First things first: While this is intended as a help for the writer for the Zone 15 story, everyone is welcome here. I’m sure we all could benefit from more people and opinions. Maybe you can even join in on the fun! (ask Robipony for that)
So, you all remember this blog (I updated it btw) ? Now I decided to make one that has some kinda mini- catalogue of the Monster Mares. This’ll include the cell number, name, race, ... Know what? Just take a look at my example.
In addition to that, I’d also like to make sure we’re somewhat on the same understanding of the cell placement. For that, I’ll include a picture at the end of this blog that shows what I think the placement is. PLEASE don’t think I want to force my own opinion on you. To make sure this doesn’t happen, I offer you this:
Describe what you think and I’ll draw and include that.
Now that that’s outta the way, this is a list of all the MMs I know of:
Cell 216
Name:
Noir
Species:
Pegasi
Monster Part:
Noir is harder to see when she stands in shadows. If the shadows are dark enough, she becomes invisible to the naked eye.
Cell 218
Name:
Disco Ball
Species:
Earth Pony
Monster Part:
Disco Ball can bend light around her. This is very exhausting, depending on how strongly the light is affected. Uses include, but are not limited to, turning into a disco ball or change of fur color.
Cell 228
Name:
Dusty Relic
Species:
Pegasi
Monster Part:
Dusty Relic’s body contains a substance similar to steel. She can bend this substance into various shapes, including but not limited to armor and weapons. This process takes a short amount of time and leaves her vulnerable for a moment, as it briefly weakens her.
additional information:
Dusty Relic has a limited amount of this “metal”. Once destroyed or lost, she cannot regain it.
Cell 234
Name:
34
Species:
Pegasi
Monster Part:
34 has the ability to spit fire, has a very high heat tolerance and has dragon-like wings and tail. Her tail is venomous.
additional information:
Cell 263
Name:
Larua
Species:
Unicorn
Monster Part:
Larua has increased strenght and stamina and can instantly teleport anywhere she visualizes.
additional information:
Black light hurts her and bright light makes her unable to teleport.
Cell 272
Name:
Ether Nebula
Species:
Baku
A baku is roughly twice the size of a pony. They have sharp teeth, tusks and dragon-like scales.
Monster Part:
Ether Nebula is a powerful mind manipulator. Uses include, but are not limited to, changing as what others see her or forcing them into a fake reality. Ether Nebula does not consume normal food. She instead enters dreams to eat them, both nightmares and good dreams.
additional information:
Personalities ‘n other stuff:
Larua
Laura is afraid of water that is deeper than 6 feet (1,8 meter) and sometimes acts like a kid. She is also very loyal towards her friends and loved ones.
Ether Nebula
Ether Nebula hides her appearence with her powers, instead choosing to look like a sparkly, slightly transparent pony. Her preferred looks are a semi-translucent dark-violet coat with a navy blue mane and green eyes.
She has not had social contact for decades and has no clue about what is going on in the real world. Because of that, she’s extremely shy. Also, she is in a borderline insane mental state.
34
34 isn’t actually this mare’s name. Her culture has no use for names, so she just goes by the number the facility gave her.
While she’s rather brutish, valuing strength over intelligence, she’s still clever. 34 is brutally honest and has little to no tact.
Dusty Relic
Dusty Relic has no memories of the time prior to her transformation. She lives to bond with a stallion to help him fight and win battles.
She is a highly component fighter with most weapons but master at none.
Please write me a PM or comment with the needed info so I can add your Monster Mare to this list . If you want me to, I could also add a more detailed list of the MMs.
I think that’s all for that, moving on to cell placement.
This seems to be how Robipony thinks it looks (and I agree):
My own idea is the following:
The left cells are even numbered and the cell on the right have the odd numbers.
In addition to that, I’d like to claim one of the two combinations I marked with pink here: (cuz I’m using the cells 216 and 218, as they would be very close to the entrance.)
Now, as I already wrote, If you want me to, I’ll draw your version of the cells. Just keep in mind that we should base it on the original story.
Also, make sure to check this thing every three days or so, it’ll be updated quite a few times.
Just remember this is based around area 51, so there should technically be some alien mares. Just saying.
Actually this is... pretty close to what I was describing. The only thing that I would change is that (at least the way I pictured it) is that the platform connects to both sides as it runs along a track sort of build into the walls. If that makes sense.
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Ok.
As for the alien part...
Maybe the baku is some kinda alien? Other dimension and stuff? I’ll go ask Colbbie.
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Like this?
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5467885 Yeah.
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included. (replacing my version.)
Well, the bad ending is done (for the most part). Now I just need to finish my chapter(s).
Here's an inspirational supply drop, for those of you who are looking for ideas/inspiration.
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I think most of us do not need the inspiration for a new MM. The only missing MM I’m aware of is the one from Airy, and it does look like he already knows what he’ll be doing. Plus, I still need the cell number for Viper Pit’s MM, but that can wait.
Oh, I also got an answer from Colbbie (4 days ago) that yes, Nebula could be some sort of alien. He didn’t tell me anything else, so I’m assuming he hasn’t figured out how just yet (or doesn’t want us to know). I’ll ask him in a few days if he doesn’t respond till then.
5471143 Well, you never know, someone knew might show up or maybe one of the already participating writers might want to write another chapter.
At the very least, the music that is included in the blog might be inspiring for their writing.