Our Day in Disdain update #4

EOur Day in Disdain

• MLP: FiM
• Horror
• Slice of Life
• Tragedy

Rainbow Dash is forced to confront the ghosts of her past and the life she left behind. Lest the one she built for herself crumbles in her hooves.

• Rainbow Dash
• OC
• Main 6

Rainb0w Dashie · 30k words  ·  43  7 · 1.4k views

it took a few days of shaking the rust off, but I finished rewriting chapter 4

Chapter Four: The Edge of Sleep and Death

I'm going to be 100% honest and say I'm not 100% sold on the name of the chapter, but because I shuffled the scenes around in this chapter so much and ended up removing the scene with the previous chapter title, I had to choose something. I don't know, I might have to revisit this chapter again for another round of polish; but while it dries I'm going to start cracking away at chapter 5.