Wha happen? · 7:59pm Nov 25th, 2020
Dear author,
What happened? Well, I decided to rewrite pretty much all of my first story. The previous one had quite a few plot holes, OOC moments, terrible grammar and all around not very entertaining. The characters simply spouted their lines, and all of them instantly knew what was going on, as well as knew each other without any introductions. Hopefully this new version rectified at least most of these problems, as well as hopefully makes it somewhat more interesting to read. I know this is practically resetting my view counter, but I think it’s worth it.
Did you like the previous version? Nope, like I said earlier, it needed a lot of work. If you like this new version, and for some reason liked the previous one and are dead set to see what it was, PM me, and I can link to the original (Which will soon be deleted from the site.) But for now, I want to push past it, and focus on writing (hopefully) much better content.
The inexperienced author, Star_Shade.
