I'm glad you guys like my story! Time to do an interest check... · 3:18pm Nov 8th, 2020
Howdy folks,
I have to say, I'm pleased that my cloptastic debut on this website was well-received. While it didn't make Featured (not that I expected to), I'm happy to see a fair number of upvotes and some positive feedback.
It's something I threw together over the course of a couple of hours, and as I read back over it, I realize it could be a LOT longer and more in-depth than it is now. That's right, I am thinking of expanding my little single chapter short into a full multichapter story. It would still be told through Gilda's journal as she transforms from brash tomboy into sultry tropical Amazon. Each chapter would be a single journal entry, much longer than the blurbs presented in the original. I'd put more emphasis on physical and mental TF, with lots of smutty scenes. Gilda would be a literary exhibitionist, describing her erotic dreams and fantasies as they overtake her mind, as well as descriptions of the various naughty things she does in the waking world (sometimes as she's writing the journal entry).
So how about it, should I commit to writing a FULL account of Gilda's time in Paradise? :)
Sounds great to me.
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That's good, because I already have an outline for it.
Now, the next question: Should I upload it as a separate story, or add it onto the existing one, leaving the original marked as such?
I think I would put it as its own separate story.