Caring for the sisters, chapter 3 might be cancelled! · 10:13pm Nov 26th, 2012
At the end of chapter two, I put an author's note saying that I was going to ask the readers what they wanted to happen in chapter three (see chapter two for details), but despite having 10 likes and at least five favorites on the fic, I've only received one suggestion (from BronyDJ) and I clearly stated that one is NOT enough, I need more suggestions. I am not out of ideas for the fic entirely, but I want to know what YOU guys want to see, and this requires your participation. If nobody participates, I'll probably have to cancel the story.
"Why cancel the story?" I hear you say? Well let me elaborate: I said I would do something for you guys, but it's not working out because it seems to me that nobody likes the story enough to care. I COULD just cancel the offer, but since I said I would use the suggestions, if I cancelled the offer now, anyone who actually wanted to see their idea happen would be denied that, which I think is very unfair to them because I did say I would.
It's your choice guys, do you want to keep the story going, or is it going to be ended where it is?
1. He tries to hang out with friends, but his mind keeps going back to the sisters.
2. He takes a casual walk around Canterlot, seeing ponies with their children which flashes back to him first being assigned to look after the sisters and the
3. first time they ever pranked and or just drove him crazy. Also go into how he tried to say he's not a foalsitter but changes his mind when he sees the pay he'll be getting. Also go into how a prank may have backfired and endangered the princesses and he saves them which has them have a new respect for him but of course they don't remain innocent and the chapter ends with him having a smile on his face
4. He can't get them out of his mind so he gets crazy drunk!
5. Another guard makes fun of him having to foalsit and gets into an epic hoof fight!
That's all I got at the moment. I'll try to think of more things later.
542622 THANK YOU! Seriously, you don't even FOLLOW me and you saw this and responded first. I'm glad there are SOME people out there who don't mind a bit of brainstorming, mainly because the closest I ever get to one is a light drizzle
543502 YOU'RE WELCOME! I'm not sure how I came across this blog post since yeah I don't follow you, but somehow I did. And I don't want this to be the end of the story, because I'm really digging it. So I came up with as many ideas on the spot as I could so I could to hopefully get your creative juices flowing.
543502 And now I'm watching you...FOREVER!
543534 But if my 'creative juices' start flowing, won't my brain leak out of my ears?
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My own custom edits (which explains why it's craptastic)
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543595 Just wear earplugs, you'll be fine. Hopefully some of my ideas helped.
543632 Oh they helped a lot, I've actually got a few ideas of how to do this, but since I'm still in High School (bleh) it might have to wait for the weekend or something.
543646 Oh I see. What grade are you in? People often mistake me for high school, which is ironic because back in high school I got mistaken for college sometimes.
543681 Haha. I'm a super senior (if you don't know, that means I'm redoing 12th grade) because I didn't get quite enough credit during my first try. But I'm going to graduate early so that's a plus.
543695 Yeah I wouldn't have guessed that's what that meant. But that's good you made it second time around.
543724 Well, making it anyway. It won't be within the next two months but it will be before everyone else graduates.