Question:

So, this:

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Am I doing bad when it comes to this? Or is this just trolling.

11 dislikes. My highest yet.

Comments

[Leonnidus454]

It might be one of 3 things,

1. people who hate Sonic .EXE
2. people who hate creepypastas
3. people who hate Sonic in general

[Leafy]

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Well.... Now I know.

[Leafy]

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Nonono, I should be sorry.

How stupid was I to write a story like this?!

[Leafy]

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Tell me that after reading all my story’s.

No joke, they all are terrible.

Also, 13 dislikes.

[Bumblebeau]

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At least you are willing to try, no writer ever starts out being the best, but the best are never afraid to fail and try again. If you look at some of the best of the best authors, some of their early works are absolute garbage that even a child wouldn't be naïve enough to finish. All you can do is learn from your mistakes and continue to grow.

The bad stories you write today are the stepping stones to the masterpieces you will write tomorrow.

[Leonnidus454]

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Nope, haven't read it yet.

[Bumblebeau]

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4. He’s killing their waifus

[sunsetshimmer_13]

Well I never really turn on the ratings on mine so idk

[The_Darker_Fonts]

For me (I haven't read or rated it) the problem would be in the chapter titles. You're giving away the deaths blatantly, and that provokes the reader(s) to skip because they already can guess what's gonna happen. "A creepypasta with Sonic and AJ dies. Welp, I've seen enough."

[Leonnidus454]

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That too.

[Mica]

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I second this. Horror works well when it is unexpected. If a horror story overuses very common horror tropes, like, "Look guys, here's a dead body, and these people are gonna be killed by a creepy shadow in the night," it becomes more of like a parody of horror, rather than something that is actually frightening to readers.