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Midnight_Lights


I’ve been a fan of MLP since I was little, and decided to try out writing about it.

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Sep
16th
2020

Is anyone good at writing battle/fight scenes? · 5:04pm Sep 16th, 2020

I'm working on a battle scene in a new chapter for Prisoner and Savior and would like to get a second opinion on it.

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I do want to see Twilight unleash the full extent of her rainbow powers upon the Sectanium Warrior and the enemy guards while buying time for Xul and the others to finish fueling up their ship. As for Zeck and his men, they'll be dealing with enemy stragglers that didn't get blasted by Twilight's magic. Once they're done refueling, Zeck and his men retreat and Princess Twilight teleports herself back onto the ship but not before she restrains one of her pursuers (possibly Ash, the Warrior, or maybe both). The moment Captain Zeck's ship takes off again, Princess Twilight locks up her pursuers in the ship's brig, considering that they will answer for their heinous acts against her back in Equestria.

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