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Flora Blossom


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The new OC story Rane Shackleton · 2:00am Aug 30th, 2020


Once upon a time, where Rane Shackleton was born in Cloudsdale in the year 1253.  Her red fur coat from her father and her cute pink eyes were from her mother.   She aged well, with her parents.  At age three, she began to talk, age five she began to walk, age six she learned how to juggle, and at age seven she began her first clown circus act.

It was only just a small crowd of ponies of family members first.  She had never got her cutie mark just yet.  She then turned eight in the Fall of 1261. It was for her schooldays that she went to the little town called Los Pegasus. 


Rane used her right hoof to hit the alarm clock.  She rubbed her eyes with both hoofs when she put words to thoughts, “So, this is it, isn’t it. I was the only foal in the household.  However, when I always go to school things get out of hoof.”

After school grounds.

Rane used the right hoof to open her locker,  a pony used it’s left hoof, and bash the locker towards Rane's face.  She shut her eyes, “AHHH...” felt pain right on her face, and dropped on the floor on her right side.  The pony who hit her face used lots of the saliva from their muzzle.  

Rane felt a wet splat on her face.  The partner who was there looked at her pathetic face, started to use the left back leg, and kicked her in the belly really hard.  Rane tried to catch her breath however, she didn’t know how long it could last.  The one pony stepped on her face and headed to her class room.  The other stepped on her left leg and headed upstairs to her class room.

A strange blue pony appeared in the hallway, with a royal blue mane, and tail. The stranger walked up to her and put both of their hoofs around her.  They picked her up and walked straight to the emergency medical room.

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Comments ( 2 )

that is my fiction cover and that is the first few words for the chapter however, it's not finished but, I will show you how far I come. Not sure what kind of title it's going to be under by... Now I feel like I have to start thinking xD....

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