Dark Sparkle's Story! · 5:05pm Nov 23rd, 2012
Dark Sparkle's Story:
She is Twilight Sparkle's sister. She trained of magic with the Twilight Sparkle. Twilight Sparkle's skills grew, Celestia was glad of her, but the Dark Sparkle's skills was bad. She was very upset. She saw that the Celestia more time spent with Twilight Sparkle, and she likes her more. Dark Sparkle made a plan. She decided to conjure Celestia, so that she forgot about the Twilight Sparkle and pour the potion into her beverage, she is did it. Celestia now spends all her time with Dark Sparkle, so her skill increased significantly. Twilight Sparkle noticed that something wrong, decided to check, and made her way to her sister's room, noticed one of her books with spells. She understood it all, and having found Celestia and Dark Sparkle, disenchanted Princess. Celestia was very evil to the Dark Sparks and unwilling her to see. Twilight Sparkle too. Then Dark Sparkle lay in her room sad. At night, when everyone was asleep, she went to the Twilight Sparkle to choose a book, and found a book with a dark spells. She liked it. She took it and walked out of the house, by presenting how will enjoy all magics. She has changed. Became Evil. Later, after learning that now Twilight Sparkle lives in Ponyville, Dark Sparkle returns to consume her revenge.
How she returns to consume her revenge, i'll write a fanfic soon! It will be called: Dark Sparkle Returns!
And her story will be in the separate story called Her Darker Side!
Hmm...a rival pupil of Celestia?
Sounds interesting! 
No offense, I promise!
Also - no offense or anything - but you might want to get someone to edit the story.
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I already have a storyline, i just need to write it!
Hm, why i want it? I like my story! And you mean, who is this someone?
Awesome!
533194 Well, not for editing the story itself. For stuff like spelling, grammar, etc. Usually when I write a story, I get a friend to read through it like that for me to make sure I didn't miss anything. It normally helps a lot, so I was just suggesting it.
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So, can you help me? I'm not good with English grammar, cause i'm Russian! I translate my text with Google translator, so there a lot of mistakes!
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Thanks!
537450 Well, I've got a few school projects to work on for this week, but I'd be glad to help with the translation!
Whenever you happen to finish a part of the story that you want me to take a look at, you can private message it to me. I'll be sure to get it back to you as soon as possible!
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Thanks! I already done 1 chapter!