I didn't even have to try and convert this one; we got us a natural born brony! 😀Story Review: Hypoesthesia · 2:17pm Apr 2nd, 2020
Hypoesthesia by Flashgen is a story submitted for the Quills and Sofa Speedwriting Contest responding to the prompt, "How will I break the news to you?" The plot is supported by Raritwi shipping, but I'd give it a chance before dumping it on this one thing.
In bed, Rarity's mane smells different, but in the morning Rarity says that she's done nothing different. Music doesn't sound as crisp, food doesn't taste as wonderful, and beautiful sights seem dulled. She tries to convince herself it's temporary, and doesn't dare tell Rarity what's going on for fear that doing that will make it permanent. When she finally finds out what's going on from Celestia, how will she break the news to the love of her life?
The plot is very well developed, and kept me wondering what was going on and just how would she break the news to Rarity. This story is one of the best stories I've ever seen on this site, and I've read a lot of FIMFics. This story is very well written. I would definitely recommend to anyone who loves shipping or can tolerate shipping. I'd even recommend it to someone who doesn't like shipping! Give it a chance, it's too good to pass up over shipping! I myself am not a big fan of shipping either and I still love this story!
Rating: 5 stars! ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
Very much appreciate the review, and I'm glad that you and many others enjoyed it.
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You're welcome, and thank you for writing such a wonderful story!