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Andoriol


I just hope to entertain people with my fancy horse words. I always appreciate criticism.

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  • 396 weeks
    IT WILL LIVE SOON

    Okay, so, original intent was for the chapter to be up today, but my head is killing me and I'm not happy with the chapter at the moment. I'm going to work on it more tomorrow night and should have it up tomorrow. Gonna be about half to a third of the size of my usual chapters, but it'll be up tomorrow night.

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  • 397 weeks
    IT LIIIIIIIIVES

    Hell, it's about time.

    It's been a bit of a rough time on my end, but I'm back and working on the next chapter of Consequences of Darkness now.

    It's been a long time coming, but even if it's not up to my previous massive tonkin' chapters, I intend to have another chapter out for it within a week from today.

    19 comments · 648 views
  • 465 weeks
    CHAPTER ON ITS WAY

    BWUAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!

    More seriously, we're in final revision mode. Gonna have my proof/pre-readers look over the chapter for anything else they can see and I'm going to let it sit a day before giving it a detailed go-over myself and we should be good to go!

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  • 467 weeks
    I AM BACK

    I'm sorry about the delay folks but I have returned! Life got in the way of writing, but now I've got a more consistent schedule and free time! As it's looking now, the next chapter will probably be up on Wedensday.

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    Also, to tide you over, something that endlessly amuses me!

    My pre-reader Aburi had a moment like this when commenting on another story:

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  • 478 weeks
    Little Update

    Situation: Recently saw Big Hero 6 (Finally!), very good movie, cute, I liked a large number of the design choices that went into it.

    Problem: I now have a raging plot bunny of an idea for a Big Hero 6 oneshot fanfic that just won't get out of my head until I put it to paper/text and I've got to get this thing out of my head before it colors my MLP stuff. Blech.

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Nov
18th
2012

On the Gary-Stu-ness of Gary and Emeris · 2:43am Nov 18th, 2012

Just for fun, I took the ULTIMATE MARY SUE LITMUS TEST for Emeris as both Emeris and Gary.

Emeris scored an iffy 29 able to go a few points either way depending on how you defined some of his traits and future plot points.

Gary on the other hand... um... Gary scored 156. When 50+ is considered a lost cause...

... wow.

Just...


...


Wow.

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Comments ( 7 )

I think that wow is an understatement but no one word yet exist to describe the shock at seeing that score.

513124 Infinite agree.

Correction: Emeris is about a 26, but as Gary it was even higher than that, I totally missed a third of the questions. Eesh.

I'm tempted to put the Mary Sue score that Emeris/Gary has at the top and bottom of each chapter to show where he's at... heh.

513493

The scoring system tends to err on the side of too many points, though, and as always it's only a metric. Introducing a plot twist centered around your character adds like 20 points to your score.

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While this is very true, Emeris did have those boxes checked, while Gary did not. It's mostly just something amusing, but I don't think I've ever seen a score that high for that test :rainbowlaugh:

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I see what you're saying, though you might want to swap "Emeris" and "Gary" in that sentence.

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Actually, no. Gary had no major plot points/twists revolving around him, whereas Emeris (eventually) will, as such, Emeris has those boxes checked, whereas Gary does not.

... unless I should check those because the GSE made the *world* revolve around the guy while he was Gary, in which case... uh... 150 somethin is pretty low :twilightoops:

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