My very first Character Bio: Cosmo Wing · 10:41pm Jan 2nd, 2020
Hey everybody! This is Friendship Agent 27 and I'm working on the first bio for my story. I'm a little nervous here but I am ready for any feedback you guys give me. This blog post is about my oc named Cosmo Wing and he is an orphan Alicorn. Because of his cosmic mane flowing like the gas of a bright star, many believe he is born from the cosmos (hence his namesake) by a god-like creature who governs space outside of the planet where all the ponies and other creatures reside on. There might also be other proof that he is related to Princess Celestia and Luna, but it is hard to say since they might not know if their parents had any other children in their family.
His age is unknown since nopony in Equestria knew of his birth and wanders the galaxy looking for answers. He can breathe in space and has a lot of magical potential in him and seems to be able to control it without and guidance. So what does he do to find a place where he can fit in? Well, Cosmo Wing moves to Ponyville, Equestria to gain knowledge about his kind. But since they are rare, finding his origin won't be easy in this story, and the only alicorns were known up til now are either still an alicorn, evolved from another form of a pony, or stillborn with no progress into an alicorn from a previous form. However, luck tends to be on his side when he joins the School of Friendship after being adopted by Princess Twilight Sparkle as her first child and learns what friendship truly means.
Cosmo Wing is a young teenage alicorn bearing the same age appearance and body structure as that of Twilight and Tempest in their teenage years with a cosmic mane that is light purple pink and a white coat of fur with wings. He has golden hooves and his flank is like the image of a swirling clockwise galaxy that is also purple. He wears a star-shaped necklace with small gems embedded in different colors, and his eyes are a mixture of cerulean blue and purple. He has a modest nature and he tends to be curious about things around him. His hobbies include reading, stargazing, science, and sightseeing. He likes sweets, apples, and culture but will dislike disorder in friendships and or supervillains. He has two friends, a hippogriff/seapony, and a female dragon.
That should be it for today. Please be kind and give me constructive feedback about this character and what you think about him. Do you like him? Should he be done better? What are your thoughts? I'll be back tomorrow with another character bio on the male hippogriff/seapony. I have to go to my mom's birthday party right now so bye!
Well first thing, if Cosmo Wing is an Alicorn, how have they not been brought to the princesses for examination? it sounds like they would be rushed to them to be raised as no other alicorns have been seen.
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I probably didn't put that in his bio because I am saving the examination of my original character to be put in the story. I never knew newfound alicorns had to be examined before entering society. Plus, I'm not putting in a lot of information about my characters and how they are going to work in the story so as to save time.
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They wouldn't HAVE to, it's just that is any new Alicorns appeared, it would be an extraordinary event, as there are only the princesses, so it would certainly be something Celestia would want to hear about and see this new Alicorn