Facts about my OC's (Abyss) (Edited 22nd June 2020 10:24am) · 3:30am Jan 2nd, 2020
Hey everyone, Heart here.
In this Blog Post; I will talking about facts about my OC Abyss, there will be five in total - one for each OC.
So without further a due here's a few facts about Abyss.
1. Abyss was around during G1 all the way to G3, she came back during G4 in my head. The memory of her in those previous generations were erased, so they weren't fully destroyed by her and her sisters fighting, making neither exist or have a large role in the Generations if they are invovled in any way canonly, like the look alike Celestia with Megan.
2. Abyss is the Alicorn of death - Her sister is the Alicorn of life. They got their powers shortly after their parents died.
3. Abyss created Discord through experimental magic with her stuffed toys. She also created the elements of Harmony.
4. Her appearance before her banishment: An black farrier like struture, Twilights mane style, golden eyes and she has dimples when she smiles. Other Appearance: (I will write in the morning)
5. She's the mother of shadows and the reason for the Windigos.
6. She currupted the Alicorn Amulet - Her sister created it to hide her husband from Abyss. Abyss curupted the amulet to prevent anyone from having it's power without a price after defeating her sisters husband in combat when she thought he was her.
7. Her love interest is Surpise/Pinkie Pie
8. She and her sister created the spell of resurrection to resurrect the previous Generations when they were fighting.
9. She and her sisters battle was so powerful - They created Doctor Whooves world within their destruction.
10. Abyss cutiemark is a black hole, but it can't be seen because her fur is black, it can only be seen in her 'Nightmare mode' or some-creature gets close enough to her flank and and actually see it through the greyish parts of her fur.
11. Paint it black is Abyss's theme song.
View of my still editing fimfic of my OC:
In the dark Abyss of some forgotten place without light, hope, witness, or reward.
A pity.. No stars.. I had hoped- No...I wouldn't even wish it for a star to endure..
'Immortality isn't living forever; It is endless torture, My own sister along with everybody else has forsaken me to its confines.'
'My sister got all she ever wanted...
Loyalty, Generosity and Kindness from her subjects...
A love that gave her laughter and a heart full of honest love...
While all I have is magic, even that had deserted me. My sister is the master of life; While I am a failure, or I had surpassed her for I the embodiment - bearer of the cutiemark of death and endless namesake... Wishes for I can grant others but cannot grant myself.
Therefore I have destroyed the world because I could not destroy myself; I brought death and destruction to all around me, made enemies of the ponies and creatures that I was supposed to serve and adore..
Oh how I tried... Oh how much I tried..
To be;
Loyal
Honest
Generous
Kind
I even tried to smile and laugh with those remaining my by side. When the friends and the love that crawled into my empty heart... left me over and over again. I tried to not allow my growing hate for my own immortal existence to over power my love for those I cared for... I tried...I tried to look at those remaining believe it was enough, to remember my parents words. 'Hate is always foolish, love is always wise.' Yet in the end I made both seem foolish...
The moment my sister chose the life of her love. I allowed both overpower me and I showed her, just how far I would go for friendship and love. I showed her how all those billions and billions of endless years, endless creatures who revered her and feared me, how life is a sweet lie, while I am a cruel truth. How it burnt, how everything burnt, even when I would wake and say my morning saying. 'Never be cruel and never cowardly.' To remind myself to hold my pain in my hoof and hold it tight, until my magic burnt a reminder into my flesh before it turned to bone, to only have my flesh and fur eventually grow back perfect...
"No one else will ever have to live like this. No one else will have to feel this pain, not while I'm still Queen."
Is what I beilived, what I had thought we both beilived...
Until my sister betrayed me, she failed my test and the burning pain; Burnt.. so much it tore my flesh away and forced me into the reaper that every mortal sees when they die. She asked why I didn't choose a lover. I never felt so insulted in my life, I felt that endless fury, causing my mane to burn away into darkness, the once golden shine of my eyes turned a fiery hot blue in sockets full of nothing but that fire.
I can't remember... but I am certain I was shouting, screaming, while my whole existence was in agony, burning me from the inside out, forcing me to let it all out in every possible way it could think off. I told her about everything, watching her eyes turn from one expression to another.. I screamed everything that hurt me at the top of my lungs, causing my ripcage to almost break from the lack of air especially when I roared;
"AND DO YOU KNOW WHAT I DID WITH ALL THAT PAIN? SHALL I TELL YOU WHERE I PUT IT? I HELD IT TIGHT UNTIL BURNT MY HOOF AND I SAID THIS. 'NO CREATURE ELSE WILL EVER HAVE TO LIVE LIKE THIS. NO CREATURE ELSE WILL HAVE TO FEEL THIS PAIN, NOT WHILE I WAS STILL QUEEN!' YET YOUR BETRAYAL HAS CHANGED ALL OF IT."
...Would I do it all again?..Maybe?..But I wouldn't hesistate to give my all my immortal years; I'm not worthy to be granted a mortal life time but I would be honoured to have with even a single mortal moment with you, to feel that final breath... Sighing out of my lungs with my last moments of life and finally be granted death along side my friends'
In this endless of my namesake... I am still burning,..I am still screaming; In endless agony,hate, lose and heartbreak and no-creature can hear my cries..Not the ones of roaring fury and not the ones beyond it - Begging for the burning to end, with that little voice in my head, deep within its Abyss...
Pain is a gift. Without the capacity for pain, we can't feel the hurt we inflict...
Fading; Fading ever so slowly. My fury eats it alive, like it has done to everything else.
Hi, Everypony, Heart here!.
Just wanted to say that this song 'When the party's over' by Billie Eilish. Gives so many vibes towards my OC Abyss/Abyssal and Pinkie Pie.
MY Version
Don't you know I'm no good for you?
I've learned to lose you again can't afford to.
Broke my horn to stop you aging
But nothing ever stops you leaving
Quiet when I'll go home and I'll be on my own
I lie, say I like it like that, like it like that
I lie, say I like it like that, like it like that
Don't you know too much already?
I'll only hurt you if you let me
Call me friend, but keep me closer
(Call me back)
Her reaper says call me back, like as if the only time she'll willingly to take further part with Pinkies life is when she when she's going to pass away, but Pinkie tries to insist to be apart of Abyss's life, to try and make the pony happy.
And I'll come to you when the party's over
Quiet when I go home and I'll be on my own
And I lie, say I like it like that, like it like that
Yeah, I lie, say I like it like that, like it like that
But nothing is better, sometimes
Once we've both said our goodbyes
Let's just let it go
Let me let you go
Quiet when I'll go home and I'll be on my own
I lie, say I like it like that, like it like that
I lie, say I like it like that, like it like that.
Hello, Every-creature, Heart here!
Today I writing my own version of Hamilton Satisified.
The Pairing of this song will be Abyss(Abyssal)/Pinkie Pie (Surpise) which bitter sweetly turned into Cheese/Pinkie Pie.
The Video that inspired this is animated by No other than Jake Kim Story!.
Alright, Alright that's what I'm talking about!
Now everypony give it up for mare of honour Queen Abyssal of Equestria!
A toast to the the groom
Spike, Big Mac and some others of Cheese's friends:
To the groom, To the groom, To the groom
A toast to the bride
other members of mane six
To the Bride, To the bride,To the bride!
To your harmony sisters who are always by your side.
Elements of harmony/Harmony
To your union
and the hope that you provide
May you always
be immortalized
(She turns to twilight sparkle and smiles because she took her Alicorn magic away from her and it returned to Abyssal, which Twilight cries bitter sweetly.)
Rewind Rewind, hopeless, Rewind.
I remember that day I just might - Rewind
I remember that day I just might -Rewind
I remember that day I remember that -Rewind
I remember that day I just might regret that day for the rest of my days.
I remember those solider colts tripping over themselves to catch up with our pace.
(Abyssal is refering to her and her sister when they were young and running away.)
I remember that dreamlike feeling of freedom like a dream that you can't quite place.
But Pinkiemena , I'll never forget the first time I saw your sweet face.
I have never been the same
innocent eyes, in a in a angel like frame.
And when you called "Surpise!", I forgot my forsaken name
set my empty heart aflame, every part aflame.
This is not a game!
Surpise: You strike me as a mare who has never had been satisified.(She means that Abyssal doesn't seem satisifed with life, and sees her unhappiness, within her contentment.)
I'm sure I don't know what you mean
You forget yourself.
You're like me, I'm never satisifed.
(Surpise means she had never been satisifed with the amount of ponies she made happy yet doesn't understand why.)
Is that right?
've never been satisfied.
My name is Abyssal
Surpise Pinkiemena carousel
Where are you from?
unimportant. There's a million thing I haven't done.
But just you wait, just you wait.
___
So, so so.
So this is what it feels like to match wits
with someone at your level what the tatarus is the catch?
It's the feeling of captivity of seeing the fading light.
(It's referring Surpise and her friends dying and her realising that she wasn't like them.)
It's my sister and I having a fight, you can see it right?
(Refering to after the funeral)
The conversation, lasted two minutes maybe three minutes, everything we said was almost in total agreement.
It's a bit of a dream and it's a bit of a dance
and bit of a posture and its a bit of a stance.
(Abyssal using sarcasm to refer her immortality the conversation she had her sister had. )
He's a bit of a flirt but I'll give it a chance.
I asked about his family did you see his anwer.
His hooves started to fidgeting he looked askance?
Hes peniless he's flying by the wind in his wings.
Handsome stallion, does he know it.
Peach fuzz and he can't even grow it.
I wanna take him far away from this place;
(Her sister referring to her husand, when she met him.)
He was a bit of flirt, but I'll give my sister at love a chance.
We asked about his family did you see his answer?
He's penniless, hes flying by the wind in the his wings
Handsome stallion, does he know it
Peach fuzz and he can't even grow it.
Sadly There be a day I will take him far away from this place.
Then I turn my sisters face and she's
[Helpless/Lifeless
And I know she is.
Helpless
and her eyes are just
Lightless/Helpless
And I realise
Three fundamental truths at the exact same time!.
(It quickly showed their past and then it returns to in between the past and the present.)
Her sisters husband: My love where are you taking me?
Her sister: I'm going to save your life
Her sisters husband: O-oh?, then by all means lead the way.
Pinkiepie: Abby where are you taking me?
Abyssal: I'm going to change your life
PinkiePie: Oh oki doki then lead the way!
we were sisters in the world where our only job was watch it without a twitch.
My sister is gone, so I'm the one who must stand alone and watch over eveyone.
I'm the oldest and the wittiest and the gossip in Equestria is insidious.
And Pinkiemena is inregal regardless that doesn't mean I wanted her any less.
"Oh Pinkie Pie!, It's good to see you again!."
"Cheese!, It's been ages!,"
I wanted to think that he's after her because she's a harmony sister, that would elevates his status. But I knew I was wrong and this time, I set that aside.
Maybe that is why I reunited him with Pinkie Pie
Now she's his bride.
Rainbow Dash/ AppleJack: Nice goin Abyssal
IShe was right...
(Past) Her sister: You will never be satisifed!
Thank you for all you girls have done.
Awww~ If it takes fighting monsters and meanie ponies and creatures to make everyone happy,then it's been all worth it! right girls?"
(The mane six confirming in their own way.)
I know the dear I know my own mind, You will never find anyone as trusting or as kind.
If I tell him that I love her, she would be redesigned. (Because with the power of harmony in the right hooves could turn a pony into alicorn, only once.)
She'll be mine
She would say she's fine.
(Refering to everyones death.)
[she'd be lying
(She fears Pinkie would become resentful towards and Abyssal doesn'twant to put on the grief on her.)
But when I fantasize at night It's Pinkie Pie's eyes.
As I romanticize what might have been if I hadn't given her up so quickly.
At least he the dear will protect her from strife..
At least I keep her eyes in my life.
To the groom
To the bride
To your harmony sisters who is always by your side.
To your union
and the hope that you provide
May you always
be immortalized
And I know she'll be happy as his wife.
And I know she'll never be satisfied
I will never be satisified .
Pinkiemena sends me a letter everyday;
I'm Keeping the castle warm while my sister is away
Shes on the pony side of Appleoosa, trying to keep the colonies in line.
But she can keep all of Appleoosa.
Surpise Pinkiemenia she's mine.
Love doesn't discriminate
Between the sinners and the saints
It takes and it takes it takes
And we keep loving anyway
We laugh and we cry and we break and we make our mistakes.
And if theres a reason I'm by her side.
When so many have tried
Then I'm willing to wait for it.
I'm willing to wait for it.
My grandfather was a fire and brimestone creature.
(Creature X3)
He said there are things that the scrolls and books won't teach ya
(Teach ya x3)
My mother was a genius
(Genius)
My father comanded respect.
(respect x2)
When they died they left no instructions
Just a legacy to protect.
Death doesn't discriminate
Between the sinners and saints
I take and I take and I take.
And we keep living anyway.
they raise and they fall and we break and we make our mistakes
and if there's a reason we're still alive
When every-creature who loves us has a died.
I'm willing to wait for it (Wait for it)
I'm willing to wait for it.
(Abyssal sees Suprise as her second life when she died.)
Fight for it (Fight for it, Fight for it, Fight for it!)
I am the one thing in life I can control
(Fight for it (x4)
I am imitable. I am an original
(Fight for it (x4)
I'm not falling behind or running late.
(Fight for it x4)
I'm not standing still I am gonna fight for it.
(Wait x4)
Sister faces an endless uphill climb
(Climb x3)
She has something to prove
She has nothing to lose.
(Lose x4)
Sister's pace is relentless
She wastes no time
(Time x3)
What is it like in her hooves?
Sister doesn't hesistate
She exhibites no restraint.
She takes and she takes and she takes.
And she keeps winning anyway
Changes the game
He plays and he raises the stakes
and if there's a reason.
He seems to thrive when so few survive, then damnit.
I'm willing to fight for it.
(Fight for it)
(I'm willing to...) Fight for it!
Life doesn't discriminate.
Between the sinners and the saints
She takes and she takes and she takes.
(And we keep living anyway.)
(They raise, and they fall and we break and we make our mistakes)
They raise and they fall
And if there's a reason why we're still alive
When so many who loved us have died
then I'm willing to-
Abyssal is lifting up a litter from Suprise and was about to burn it but she sees the last words of 'Pinkie Promise' and she appeared and Abyssal remembers of her pinkie promise and 'Surpise' holds her hoof and she eventually calms down.
wait for it...
(Wait for, Wait for it.)
Wait for it
(Wait for it)
(Wait)
(If Abyssal never went to the wedding of cheese and Pinkiepie)
Your smile shines as brightly as the sun
They're here again
The feelings you have brought upon my heart.
I'll try ignore what's here and play pretend again.
You don't know is better off unsaid.
Can I simply go alone with no more pain
Never see you're lovely
even in my dreams
Can I cut these rainbow ribbons and party strings
Those nights and days
With light blue eyes
This is goodbye
I know you'llnever comprehend
my choices are not easy for you to understand
Pretend I'm there when at last you and him are wed
No, I cannot stop bybut I promise I wish your happiness.
What if my hoof fell upon your rosey cheek.
If I were to confess right now - Return my feelings
I have to cut these rainbow ribbons and party strings.
Don't ask me why Shut your blue eyes.
This is goodbye
Goodbye my love
My laughter