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HeartShatter


Immortality isn't living forever; It's endless torture, My own sister along with everycreature else has forsaken me to its confines - Abyss inside her prison.

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    Edited 5th 2020 - Altered Version of Servant of Evil

    Hello, everypony! Heart here.

    Today I have been listening to vocaloid Rin and Len music series that involves the twins as a Princess and servant.
    Tell a lie - I have been listening to it for a few days and I have only today had currently picking at the lyrics to form my own version of it for my OC Abyss and her sister whom is the mother of Celestia and Luna.

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Edited 5th 2020 - Altered Version of Servant of Evil · 4:45am Dec 1st, 2019

Hello, everypony! Heart here.

Today I have been listening to vocaloid Rin and Len music series that involves the twins as a Princess and servant.
Tell a lie - I have been listening to it for a few days and I have only today had currently picking at the lyrics to form my own version of it for my OC Abyss and her sister whom is the mother of Celestia and Luna.

Without further a due here's what I have currently come up with; Please be aware this is going to be a slow process because I want to sync the lyrics with the music properly.

Both of the sisters
We are their loyal servants and their country's Queens.
Us, a pair of pitied Alicorns, Burdened by our destiny
Let Loneliness consume us, if that what must be done.
We will gladly play the parts, so that they may live and continue on.

*Instrumental*

On the day the two of us were brought into this world.
They gave their blessing and names to us Abyss and ____

But for reasons we we're too young to understand.
The curse separated us from our parents, and we grew to rule the land.

If this cruel fate plots to extinguish your light
If it finds the need to make you break and cry

Don't you worry, sister, I am right by your side.
So just smile for me; It'll be alright.

We are their loyal servants and their two loving Queens.
Us, a pair of pitied alicorns, burdened by our immortality.

Let loneliness consume us if that what must be done.
We will gladly play the parts of life and death, so they'll have a blissful one

Abyss's sister:

Wandering in the streets of town a stallion caught my eye, coat and mane were blue as the night sky up above I felt a spark in my heart may it be love?
_________________
both of the sisters
But we both know all mortal things must come to a end.
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Abyss:
Its is fates orders, that my friends lives must once again come to a end.
I must bide by its rules, Like I have so many times before!.

Abyss's sister:
It is fates orders, his life I cannot defend.
I will no longer obey it's rules, I must betray the sister I adore!
_______
Abyss:
So tell me my friends why these tears continue to pour!

Abyss's sisters husband when she starts crying out of the blue in front of him.

Tell me my love what caused these tears to pour?
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Both of the sisters
We both are no longer their loyal servants, no longer their loving Queens.
Us, a pair of cursed ponies, one willing to betray to break our lonely destiny.
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Her sister with her found love and Celestia and Luna:
"Your highness' brioche will accompany your tea."
And my foals clapped their hooves with glee; So innocent and sweet...

Abyss:
"Abby Brioche will come with our teaparty!"
I remember you clapped your hooves with glee; So innocent and sweet...

Abyss's sister;
It appears this world will meet its fate.
Torn by my dear sister, crumble under her hate.
The ponies claim that justice will be brought on to her today.
I won't see it through; They will not get their way

Abyss's sisters husband before she could go to fight Abyss
Now listen my dear, give that amulet to me.
You and I will switch, with our foals you must flee.

I will be okay, I am an alicorn don't you see? my death will never be.
With this no-pony will know, now dear don't look back and just leave.
I am only your double; But with you our foals run free.
________________

Abyss's sister as she follows the army after sending her foals to sleep to take on her sister:

Us a pair of broken souls, damned by cruel destiny.
If the darkness consumes her soul, as the masses curse out her name.
Then I am at fault too for I am the one to blame.

Long ago there was a kingdom ruled by two queens.
At that time, we were already gone the past tender age of fourteen.
An Alicorn of evil doomed the kingdom from within.
But the story lies for she was the only one who wanted new life to begin.
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Abyss and her sister
If the whole world plots to extinguish your light.
(Finally, the breaking bells announce the time)
If they find the need to make you break and cry
(I can feel the darkness consume me with each passing chime)
Don't you worry, sister I will be right by your side.
(With your eyes averted, you tell me another lie!)

So just fight with me; It will be alright.
(And with my scythe whistle I call out my line)

Abyss's sister:
We once were their loyal servants and their loving Queens
Us, a pair of pitied Alicorns, burden by our immortality
Let spellfire consume me for what I have done.

I have woefully sealed you away as you called; One day I will pay.
The day will come that you are free- It will a long time till then.
It would be nice to live with you but It seems we'll never meet again.

Story - Abyss and her sister were born by the former barer of life and death, they turned to Alicorns shortly after their parents died. They died because once Alicorns have children. Their powers are given to their children that appear to be one race when they are first born. Abyss would've been a Unicorn, or an Earth pony and her sister would've been a Pegasus.
In my opinion this is way Cadance didn't die because Flurry came out as an Alicorn and obviously it's a kid friendly show.

Also Celestia doesn't get all of her mothers powers because her mother strained it, so controling the sun is pretty much like controling life, since her sister is alive. Luna didn't get the power of death, but instead she gives good dreams, controls the moon and her aunts lingering shadows are drawn to her and turns her into Nightmare Moon.

Even though mortals still die; Abyss's job was to make sure they had a peacful one, but now without her the mortal ponies could die young and horribly, like with life. Her sister job was to give the ponies long and healthy lives but without her ponies and other creatures can live poorly and horribly to the extent they wish for death to come around.

At the end of this song; Abyss's sister had used all of her magical power against the elements of harmony that Abyss had and her natural power, so her immortality was taken away by the sheer power strain from her last spell to send her sister in the next world sealed away in the alicorn amulet. Then she and those who were remaining were all brought in the other world, the humans were sent to a different one separate from theirs because she decided that their world was too dangerous for the humans.

In this next world she was mortal with her husband and gave birth to Celestia and Luna once again and took care of Discord until she died before she knew that her sisters power as leaking out the Alicorn amulet, or her darkened heart had effected the next world too, causing the three races to hate each other and windigos.

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Also I want everyone to know, Abyss's colours right now are her normal colours, she's a black farrier. Her 'darkside' is pretty much like Dusk, Rapdash and Chandelier mixed together from pokemon. Her mane and rest of her body is in the form of black smoke except her face is a skeleton. With a hood like those ghosts in rune factory, and a scythe like Ruby's from RWBY. But in purples and blacks.

Also here's the order of my profile picture with their shipping.

Abyss (Alicorn) x Pinkie | Bluemist (Butterfly Pony) x Queen Chrysalis. | Emerald Gleam (Changing & past form before her mother cut it all off, she now has a Bob cut with glasses, she has a broken horn and badly holely wings) x Princess Luna. Heart (Mother of Chrysalis & former form) x Princess Cekestia. (Heart unfortunately passes away when she's freed from the cacoon by Celestia after Bluemist gets together with Chrysalis and Emerald Gleam gets with Luna. It's like as if Celestia had everything that Luna wanted, but at this moment Luna gets to be loved while Celestia has nothing but the dying love she wished she didn't push away.)

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