New Story "Loving Submission" rough draft complete. · 2:03am Jul 19th, 2019
So in my last blog, I mentioned a roseluck/zebra clopfic. I'm pleased to announce this story's rough draft has been completed! Standing at 7600 words pre-edit it's at just the right length I'd hoped for. It's detailed enough so that everyone who reads it will understand the context of what's going on.
The premise is pretty simple. Equestria and the neighboring zebra nation have gone to war, shades of Fall of Equestria. Unlike Fall of Equestria the pony nation does not submit but is subjected to a long occupation of its border regions which only ends when zebra resources overextend themselves, forcing the zebras to the negotiating table with Celestia.
Celestia negotiating from a position of strength in terms of manpower/resources but weakness in terms of war objectives talks the Zebrecan Caesar down from surrendering control of any of Equestria's land. Because Equestria must offer something in exchange for peace, she will allow a portion of Equestria's female earth pony population to go into bondage over in Zebra lands to help restore their ruined farms and prevent a large-scale famine. Caesar wisely agrees to the proposed terms.
The story picks up somewhere in Zebracon on a plantation with Roseluck as a slave. The terms of the treaty were that the zebras would release all of their slaves back to Equestria after ten-years time and this hasn't happened. Roseluck, along with a number of other mares has stayed behind of her own free will, after becoming sympathetic to the zebras and falling in love with two of her captors. Celestia is demanding the slaves either be returned immediately or given full citizenship and the freedom to come and go as they please between their two nations. Equestria and Zebracon stand on the brink of war once again.
Set in an alternate universe prior to Luna's return from banishment and thus fully outside the canon of MLPFIM, Loving Submission is based on an idea given to me by a reader through private message. His original idea sounded rather cruel to me or having her be raped and forced to breed so I put my thinking cap on and gave the concept the friendlier tone you tend to get from my stories.
This is usually where I put in a snippet of the story but I really want it to be fully edited and presented in its entirety. I really hope you all enjoy it and this might be a deal-breaker for a lot of you but this is a Devil's Triangle scenario with two stallions and one mare. I'm really sorry fams. If it's any consolation, the two stallions don't have sex with each other placing it outside the orgy camp and into the polyamory side of the fetish spectrum.
I hope at least some of you enjoy it. And if not... well it's a one-shot so at least I won't be able to cancel it on you.
Yay! New story is good
Cant wait!