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I don't know about you, but I'm mainly here to read. Maybe give some thoughts. I dunno.

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  • 141 weeks
    Fallout Girls- The Wrinkle in my Predictions

    So. It seems that is fans of Fallout Girls have been thrown another curveball. Yes, I know it happened 2 weeks or so ago, but still!

    Luna, Trixie, and Sonata are now in the Wasteland. And now I can only guess that they will be taking part in the DLC's and other sidequests.

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  • 143 weeks
    Rainbow's Factory- The Fresh Perspective I Needed

    For those of you who've been around since the beginning of this blog, you likely remember the first stories I talked about were Cupcakes and Rainbow Factory. I briefly said that, while Rainbow Factory had some decent lore and gore, it was more or less just another 'Mane 6 gone bad' grimdark story to be read, and then dismissed. And while I know that it's become something of a brony icon alongside

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  • 170 weeks
    Fallout New Vegas: Unexpected Friends- Good Story With a Big Letdown- Part 2

    Throughout the entirety of the story, there are many instances similar to the Honest Hearts choices that I think make the story weaker, or less strong at the very least. Things like going theatrical with the Think Tank, rather than turning them against Dr. Klein, to even outright ignoring Ulysses during the confrontation in the silo.

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  • 170 weeks
    Fallout New Vegas: Unexpected Friends- Good Story With a Big Letdown- Part 1

    This is a story that, quite frankly, I'm not sure how to describe, or at least I don't know where I stand. On the one hand, this is a very well written story that has earned the praise it's gotten. But on the other, this story has so many things that just..... frustrate me. I'm sure that all my problems are just subjective, and possibly amplified from other points of view, but I

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  • 173 weeks
    Stories in Stone: Luna's Royal Guard- The Story That Reimagined Nightmare Moon

    Wow. There is a lot to unpack here.

    Those of you who have been with me a while know that I have talked about the author TDR in my Author of Honor series. (Note: start that up again)
    You likely also know that I had been putting this series off because I needed a break from long stories for a while. Well, I finally read it and....

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Jul
7th
2019

Murky Number Seven- Project Horizons Done Right (Do I even need to say that there are spoilers here?) · 4:41am Jul 7th, 2019

Here we are. Fallout: Equestria- Murky Number Seven, the story that, in my opinion, takes the Fo:E crown.

And I am being completely serious with that statement.

MN7 really is Project Horizons done right. It has the length in words and the grand scale, it has the extremely bleak atmosphere, it has direct ties to the original Fo:E, and it also has tremendous tragedy as well.

However, this has some differences that make it work: it's confined to Fillydelphia alone, the tie-ins to the original are used to progress the story rather than to intrude on the original, and, most importantly, this story made me want to see the characters all the way through to the end.

While it is true that Fillydelphia seems to fall into the same trap as Hoofington from PH of being too large, we also have to take into account that real-life Philadelphia is the largest city in Pennsylvania. If you look at a map of Philadelphia, you could rationalize that, yes, Fillydelphia could possibly be as large as it is here. As such, the size of the city doesn't bother me here as much as it did in PH.

The tie-ins are used to help inspire others, provide hope, cause despair, and otherwise drive the plot along. And they are brought in well enough that the tie-ins don't feel distracting.

Finally, the characters, the ones who make this story work. Murky especially is a character you can't help but feel sorry for, especially with his background and when we first see him, as well as several other factors including his illness. Top it all off with him being a pegasus with broken wings, and the sympathy just keeps rolling in.

I won't talk about the other protagonists here, as Murky provides an excellent base example. They each have their own histories, their own strengths and weaknesses, their own villains and challenges to overcome, they make a wonderful family of sorts, and when the final act came, well...

Let's just say that when I finished this story, I was internally screaming for joy, and I think I physically had trouble breathing for about half an hour afterwards. It seriously hit me that hard. Not even the original Fo:E was able to get that reaction out of me.

So if you have not read this story yet I highly encourage you to read it. I'm fairly certain you will not be disappointed.

But for those of you who have read it, what were your thoughts? Is it better than the first story? Worse? What were your favorite moments from this story? Favorite characters? And what emotional impact did this story have on you? Did it inspire you? Did you find it preachy? Did it make you laugh? Cry? Give you hope?

Let me know in the comments. And, once again, thank you for reading.

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